Angelic adventures

Self-Published

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Description

The year 2090.

Gabriel hope is a retired US navy Lieutenant Commander, after loosing his hands in a freak incident. He is left looking for a job to support his family.Luckily there is one company looking for just the right man to lead an in-game administration department.

MUSE inc, in the time of weakened technological advancements disovers technology that allows users to transfer their subconciousness into a specially grown universe.Instead of the usual VR experience, users can enjoy fully the sensation of a game world.

Since MUSE has limited control of the universe, they create special versions of the headsets for the in-game admins.Armed with limited knowledge, Gabriels department ventures into the unknown to start their duties.

Lol-my grammer is absolutely atrocious

This is my first real story so im going to need feedback and directions

Warning- Those who don't like gender bender or 18+ or confused mc

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: eagle_360

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.2/ 5.0
Followers: 132
Views: 59,869

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Community Reviews(3)

StatesidespyRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The story so far has been focused more on establishing the protagonists situation and light world building as of chapter 18.
The author has few to none for spelling mistakes and tenses so far have all been correct. The story is in perfect English.
The author has a clear view on the direction the story is going from my perspective and asks for advice with world building and improvements.
The story breaks away from the basic VR stereotypes and mould. The path the story is taking is a far more organic approach compared to other technology based books in the VR genre.
The characters emotions are much more realistic than the common "Problem = Panic" and they have some realistic personalities for the characters.
More world building is required but it is not really urgent for the next 5-10 chapters. Maybe more.
There's not much more to say currently about the story currently other than it having a good foundation for the future.
CrywolfsevenRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I am enjoying this so far, I think it’s a bit silly how he has no ability to contact the outside world directly, that said I truly am looking forward to seeing where this story goes next.
Spoiler: Spoiler
JetsmillionRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
My main issue with this story is that the main character is supposed to be a game admin. He doesn't act like one. Instead he is written like a newbie player who knows nothing about the game.