Ancient Blood Mage

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2016

Author

Radikai

• Chapter 7 : The Purgatory Emperor
  Jun 8, 2016
• Chapter 6 - Who Are You?
  Jun 4, 2016
• Chapter 5 : Struggle
  Jun 2, 2016
• Chapter 4 : Golems, Golems Everywhere
  Jun 1, 2016
• Chapter 3 : Ancient Cave
  Jun 1, 2016
• Chapter 2 : Into the World
  Jun 1, 2016
• Chapter 1 : Moving Out
  May 31, 2016

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• vkg313Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I like your story so far (chap 7)!  It looks like its going to be interesting!
• Final LifeRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  It's so interesting!! I can't stop reading \('^')/
  whatever you are doing, keep doing it!
• aisenfield-kunRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The infrequent release schedule may left some people hanging on the cliff. But for a newcomer, it was a  great effort. Decent grammar, character and style. Maybe tone down the amount of girls, we don't want another cliche harem situation right?
  Best of luck and keep up the great work!
• tagojitsuRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  This novel quite good!
  I will support this story
  the same as other stories about vr but the difference is the Indonesian author
  me to from indonesia, so i will support you!
  please about the story in the novel should be explained about the status of what gamers have higher advantage basic owned status
  and also it would be nice at the end of each story you can show the status of being owned by mc so that if there are additional stats we can know the total stats owned by mc.
  and always remain on the basis of the story!
• EnteryRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I was pretty hesitant to read this story for some reason, but after reading it I was surprised how good it actually is.
  I'm giving this story 5 stars, because good stories need to get higher rating.
  Style
  You are changing the point of view, which is always a good thing. Maybe you should describe things more, like environment etc.
  Grammar
  I shouldn't judge your grammar, because i'm not a native speaker either and i make a lot of grammatical errors too. But the only thing i really mind and have to point out is your problem with plural. I thought you wouldn't make the same mistake over and over again, but i was mistaken. You should really improve that at least. And please fix your previous chapters too, because when there are mistakes like "They was" its like a punch in the face.
  I don't wanna sound like i'm perfect, but you really should avoid these basic mistakes. It really degrades your story by quite a bit, which is sad, because your story is pretty good in everything else.
  Story
  I really enjoy this story, i actually ended up reading this up to 50th chapter in one sitting and right now  i'm waiting for more. Maybe your start is a bit slow and a lot of people may have dropped it, because of it, but what comes after that is worth it. A lot of ppl want you to explain game elements better, so you should maybe add more game elements and explain stuff better,. I personally don't like reading stuff like "Frost Nova dealt 90 DMG", but some people seem to enjoy this, so its up to you.
  Character
  I like almost all of the characters you've introduced. The thing i actually don't like is that there aren't any dickheads, which are pretty common in MMORPGs/VRMMO. Even the "villain" was overall a good guy, just a little bit greedy. I can only think of 2 guys who were bullying the mc and were "evil" (and that wasn't even in maya),  but beside that i can't think of any.
  The MC seems like a reasonable guy and i don't remember him making some illogical decision thus far. Female charact
• moRlesRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Me encanta la historia y va muy bien con que maya genere nuevas habilidades por las acciones, ademas de que los personajes tiene un fondo y no vienen de inpreviso ,..... sigue escribiendo y saludos desde Chile :D
• FadooRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Looking forward to more. This novel has one of the better starts I have seen, and I'm just hoping the author finishes the story, unlike most of the writers on this site.
  4.5\5, mostly because it's too early
• KrushahRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  A LitRPG, great story! Good world building, not the usual elves, orcs and dwarves.
  I enjoy reading the action filled  chapters, the developing plot line is intriguing and leaves me wondering where it will go next. There might be too little game mechanics for people who want a lot of that in their LitRPGs, but that hasn't bothered me at all. I am always happy when this title pops on on my list with a new chapter and waste no time reading it.
  English is not the author's first language, the grammar is poor but  it is not difficult to understand the intended meaning. The main character is a bit flat, the development is two dimensional, descriptions only. I think a lot of the character depth is lost because because of the language barrier.
  I do recommend this book for people who love LitRPG, good action, and want a fresh perspective.
• cocolowRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  This is another VR story that clearly draws inspirations from others in the same genre. This is not a bad thing, but as of yet nothing really new. Its reminds me a bit of 'Awaken Online' and I think it is worth a look.
  The grammar can be a little inconsitent as I stumble across a handful of errors each chapter, but that is easily fixed with proof reading when you have a finished project.
  I hope the author sticks it out and completes the story; chapter releases are very inconsistant, but I do enjoy reading it when new chapters appear. This is one of those stories on RoyalRoad that I feel the author improves his writing and story telling ability as it progresses.
  Keep up the good work. Keep writing and I'll keep reading
• MattajRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  Overall a good story but it consists of too many fighting scenes in comparison to the storyline. It feels that both western and eastern styles were mixed in here. Especially the annoying parts of eastern novels can be felt (at least for me they are annoying).
  Grammar is quite good but I do not understand why author makes mistakes with gender of one character only (smith teacher), e.g. he instead of she or his instead of her.
  I read until chapter 53 and it feels like the one of the stories that will be extremely long and I will drop it somewhere on the way (like Stellar Transformation maybe, note  that it is only comparison of progression into the story and not comparing both of these stories).
  One other thing that is annoying are reactions of MC to some of events that happened in the past or are happing currently.
  I would suggest to give this story a try, maybe it will suit your tastes. If not, you can always stop reading it.