An Otherworldly Tale: The Apocalypse/A School Saga

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The origin story of The god and The Demon. While technically the third installment I've written, and first that I've ever shared, it is chronologically the first saga. An apocalypse, the school saga.

"Do you like limes? I do. Quite a lot. They are the sweetest dessert I can think of. And I love my desserts. As it always has been." Evan said, upon being asked his favorite thing in the world.

"The best lime comes from a world destroyed. An apocolyptic world. That is the only place you can find sweet limes. Or, at least, limes as sweet as the one I love so very much." Evan said, upon being asked where to find sweet limes.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2020
Author: Lime_Lover

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.0/ 5.0
Followers: 14
Views: 15,378

Chapters(46 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

pureworthRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I must say, it's an amazing book, and I personally found it very interesting to read. Possibly one of my favorite reads! I hope to hear more of you, and im excited to read more of your books, lime person. Plus, your other books are quite good too, and I rlly enjoy them!
mcarandang2Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I'm going to be honest here. I'm a gentle grader, I don't see the point in criticizing a novel, unless it felt like an author didn't put effort into it. I'll admit this one is quite rough around the edges, however every beginner has to start somewhere and at least the author is actually publishing a decent amount. Now I don't think the author has gotten the grip of showing instead of telling and the characters aren't the easiest to empathize with and I wasn't able to make it that far. So I understand why the ratings aren't the highest (yet?).
The character's speech could use some work and is quite difficult to empathize or understand. He is missing a few decent qualities that would make him a fun to read MC.
Grammar is generally not a problem, so I'll skip this category.
This isn't a litrpg, so some points at least for trying to be original, however the whole introduction and proceeding events don't exactly flow and are a bit difficult to swallow. The transitions are just told to you instead of written about and makes it difficult to read.
It's got a beginner style to it, but these things takes time and readers to polish.
I've definitely read much worse asian novels and such, so it's not that bad. However the author could definitely use some improvements here and there to make the story even better. Keep up the hard work and I look forward to seeing another writer continue to improve on RRL.