An Engineer In Night City
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Description
Mark Henderson was a system engineer that just finished a gaming marathon of Factorio. Caught up in a spatial anomaly, he finds himself in a new world with the Factorio system. Will he tame Night City, or will Mark be shaped by the world of Cyberpunk?
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Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2024
- Author
- Ryuan
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.4/ 5.0
- Followers
- 324
- Views
- 85,280
Chapters(43 total)
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Community Reviews(6)
- Hurrican999Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0Wake the hell up, samurai. We've got a factory to grow.
I like how this is almost plausible as tech in cyberpunk. I wonder how people are gonna react to him building a space ship, or what's gonna happen afterwards.
Anyways, I enjoy reading this. MC is a bit OP pretty quick, but I also love how the author did the MC's "negative trait." - NamtekcorRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I really enjoy the story and I read it really fast but it hasn't updated in a long time so I'm wondering if the author dropped it or not.... That was my comment but the website won't let me post it unless it's 50 words long so ignore this part
- cybernightRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I was bored and looking for something to read when i picked this story but in the end, I was pleasantly surprised at how funny and engaging the story has been so far. I've played the cyberpunk game before but i have never even heard of factorio until today. The author manages to seamlessly combine both games together to the point that it works. I have to say that i enjoyed reading this.
- heliRDRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0I do appreciate when authors come up with scenarios and then inpute them in a story line, I appreciate them more when they are able to blend those new stories together. The author did that in this situation, the overall story is wonderful, i have read many fan fic and none like this, this put a bit of twist in it,the style of the story did not follow the cannon much but made use of the characters to build the world. I know game elements was Introduced so the game mechanics was also used and we cannot find fault in that.There were some places that the author kind of glossed over which disturbed the immersion but the story was good enough. Maybe because the author does not gave an idea or thought is was not needed. The story so far is consistent with the growth of the mc and I would say fast paced and yeah somethings that will never truly happen according the lore of the characters on the cannons but all well and good.
There were not much Grammer issues that I could see, so there is no need for corrections.
I do like where the story is coming from and where it will need to, hope the author could keep it up. - DoctorBlazeRoyal Road★★ 2.0Just read the first chapter or two and you'll see what I mean. If you are reading this author please just run your chapters through Grammarly or ChatGPT, its nearly unreadable how bad the grammar is. Not only that but just how the story is structured, please use some better method to change scenes/POVs.
- nameraRoyal Road★★ 2.0I like the idea of the story very much. The "companion" is a nice touch.
But the grammar and spelling break my immersion every few sentences:
- the use of commas switches from way too many to none at all
- the conjugation of verbs in connection to "he" "she" "it" is often forgotten, or added when not needed
- the written tense is not cohesive
- random switches of perspective from third to first and back to third person, without apparent reason
- wrong uses of prepostions e.g. : "from" instead of "off", "on" instead of "in" etc.