Ambassadors to another world

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Description

In 2144 an experiment on wormholes that was intented to find a solution for interstellar travel opened up the door to new possibilities, a world that we thought only existed in books and in our imaginations. A world of magic and dragons.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
Heswe

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICSCI-FISUPERNATURALMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSSTRATEGY

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Rating
4.0/ 5.0
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174
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121,163

Chapters(55 total)

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Community Reviews(7)

  • pizzalad3Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Wow a really great story. I love it. Like one of the anime. Hope they don't bulky the local legendary creatures. They are just trying to make babies and live so don't C4 them .
  • KirinRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I have thouroughly loved reading your work from chapter 1 till the most recent addition.
    The world building has been absolutely superb!
    Though if i must write one small thing that bothers me, it is that i wished the chapters were longer - i find them somewhat short.
    But overall i feel it has been eons since i last found a story of this caliber and that this story is a must read on this site.
    Keep up the good work!
  • ReidRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I'm very much in love with this story!
    Thank you so much for blessing us with such an amazing read!
  • EnhozRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Using the words of a modern day philosopher : ,,Very nice''
    -Pewds
    The style of writing is not quite my favorite,dialogues are sometimes clunky but it gets a pass.Kinda slow paced,like before the meeting of the king and Nelson,everything might aswell be the prologue(15 chapter-ish').This has tons of potential and i can't wait to see more,keep up the good work Heswe.
  • SpiralBakaRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Title: Ambassadors to another world
    Genre: Fantasy, Sci-fi
    Protagonist: [none] or [too many to mention here]
    Setting: a fantasy world and a sci-fi world that got connected.
    Tension Level: Low-Medium
    Basic Premise: the earth was connected to another world by a wormhole that they made. now they had to explore the new possibilities. while the fantasy world had to cope with the outsiders that appeared.
    Chapter Content: how each world deal with the other world. how the village near the wormhole had became a big town, how ambassadors and scientist negotiates with the nearest kingdom for material, knowledge, and goods.
    Chapter Reached: 30
    Personal Opinion: feels like nihonkoku shoukan. pretty good. but somewhat slow at the beginning. it's good that the release frequency is high at this time...
  • The Feedback TroupeRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    1.Summary:
    The story follows a bunch of Scientists that are specialized in various fields and the ambassador Nelson as they establish diplomatic relations and explore “Nelithea” - A fantasy world filled with monsters and magic.
    2.Review:
    A story so enamoured with detailing everything perfectly that critical elements are sometimes forgotten.
    a.Short verdict:
    Overall Score: 3
    Fans of fantasy or Kingdom Building may enjoy this. Unfortunately the aspect of management is severely underdeveloped despite how often the author goes more into detail than necessary at times and could break ones suspension of disbelief
    b.Long Review
    Style Score: 3.5
    Quite often minor details are explained in narration with more detail than necessary, even extraneous things, which becomes a minor annoyance at times. The rest of the writing is fine - it is rather plain, which does not make the many descriptions any better, but it gets everything across.
    Grammar Score: 4
    Unfortunately the Writer makes a single consistent mistake: He writes properties extending into the present in present tense - which, while correct in dialogue, is wrong when the narration is set in simple past.
    I did not deduct additional points for this, as it is very readable story with relatively few typos aside from this. (But you should keep it in mind)
    Story Score: 3
    Character Score: 3
    The story starts two years in, with an already established outpost in the new world and the troupe we meet presumably consists of the first non-military personnel allowed there.
    But despite this there are no decontamination protocols, they get to explore the world without being surveilled or even accompanied by military personnel and a supermarket has already been built in the nearest village.
    As you may already be able to tell the story continues to throws up a lot of question marks in terms of administration or operation of the military base.
    The situation of the main characters is not much better.
    Aside from the actual ambassador and the t
  • ZabzablordRoyal Road
    ★ 1.0
    Alright, I'll be clear. The readers need to stop claiming this work here is incredible because it is anything but that.
    Everything is wrong. I'll get grammar and style out of the way. Grammar is simply a fucking slaughter. "But- but balblabla english not my first language blablabla." Don't even try that with me. Grammarly, oxford dictionary, suplementary classes in english I don't care: there are plenty of way to get better. I'm not a Grammar Nazi but that is just too much.
    As for style, well apart from there being none, it's simply ruined by the quality of the above mentioned point.
    Let's shift to the characters. They are out of any world you can imagine. Nobody, and I want to be clear so I'll say it again in bold NOBODY behaves like this. I get enthusiasm. I get it. But the main cast of scientist? They are just absolute nutcases. Is it supposed to be humor? It failed.
    I can accept Nelson, the ambassador a little more but he is nothing more than a prick at the end.
    As for the story, I don't even know where to begin to show the world it's wrong to give this a five star. I know I will need to spoil though and here it begins.
    Spoiler: Spoiler
    First : the timeline and the roles. So two years happened between the opening of a portal between Earth and generic fantasy land (GFL). Two years during which nothing happened. Nothing. So much of nothing, in fact, that the cast is a team comprised of scientists tasked to explore GFL and one ambassador to negociate with king of a part of GFL.
    If you have the shadow of a brain, you should already be saying "what the fuck, why did they wait two years? But anyway, the critic must exagerate. Things must have happened."
    No. cast n°1 is an engineer sent to study adamantium and mithril. Which makes no sense. It's like going to the moon to study moon soil. No. You go to the moon, grab a sample and go back to Earth and to your lab. In the same fashion, you acquire a pound of adam. one of mith. and go back to Earth to run it through your e