Aldernoh

Self-Published

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Description

Redius Ip, born into a major household, is the black sheep of the family. Abused and looked down upon... but is it so simple? Just what is his origin? His destiny?Witness his struggles and rise to power in a world filled with magical elements.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2015
Author
Kiroe

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMARTIAL ARTS

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.6/ 5.0
Followers
338
Views
101,266

Chapters(23 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • FamineRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Good story very fun to read and Mc is super badass
  • Skull_MechRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    A believable OP MC that anyone can relate to(Feeling glee in seeing someone getting their just rewards or irony when positions are swapped). He is not naive in a world where strength is justice with a cool and calculated exterior, masking a mean streak within him. The setting has a hint of Samurai era japan where commoners make way for passing samurai lords on the main street which I am pleased about as it shows the difference in social standing between a magician, knight and the weak. The grammar for this story is in par with the bar set by the most popular of novels. Pace of the story is great with MC's past slowly revealed as the story orogresses.
    A definite must read for those seeking a story of a Dark OP MC where the author shows effort to detsil not only how the MC interacts with others but how other interact with him and amongst each other, giving out a fleshed and immersive world.
  • KandoralRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I have to say it is a really great story up to now. You can't find this often.
    Grammar wise i have nothing to say, of course some mistakes can happen, but if there is something it is so small it doesn't change the meaning of the sentences.
    Character: The character are well written and the development comes with the chapters.  (Well at the beginning i thought Ji would be a girl -cliche-)
    Story: only 4 stars because it somehow reminds me of BTTH and CSG. BUT it is a good story
    I can recommend this story for everyone to read (this is conclusion up to the newest chapter 20 from 29.01.2016)
  • imlmendezRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    I'm really liking this so far, interesting how the "resentment and veangeance" is not forced, like in other stories, it seems natural and fitting the MC, the world setting is intriguiing so far, i really would like to see this fiction continue!
  • blackgoldRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    great story but feels lacking. just wish that you would go in-depth with the training and specifics, also though this is my personal preference i would like to see hints about the higher realms, it seems plus able to gain incite about the combat ability of does realms. though i do feel an Xianxia  form of rhetoric in the story :B who knows maybe we will see some higher realm/ immortal fight.
  • BaronFroggieRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    It's good and seems to have good pacing at the moment. Keep it up
  • AllstarallRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    So far, so good! The main reason why I like this series is because of the real ice cold personality that the mc has and the other characters.
  • Elina VioletsRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I Really liked it X3
    It feels like his dark past is not too forced and the training has a balance between informatief and slow-pased
    I do feel that the strongest powers (the 4 major houses) are a bit too weak but if he's gonna go further into the world that won't be a problem
    Hope you'll continue it cause it's awesome :D
  • DustRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    The MC seems interesting, but not entirely believable, since some of his actions are not at all explained in the story, making him look naive and random at times.
    Also, there's a lot of Coiling Dragon influence here, so I am also not that certain about the Original tag.
    Overall, a standard, cliche kind of a story with an OP protagonist hell bent on revenge.
  • KasstielRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    **CONTAINS SPOILERS ALSO THIS IS A AMATEUR READER PERSPECTIVE REVIEW**
    The story is fairly straight forward the whole "Revenge" thing has been used a lot mostly so that the MC can be OP, but it mostly ruins the story if it isn't done properly this series is borderline between going off the tracks into a bad Fiction and turning into a really good one.
    This review is mostly going to be about what you can fix and i would also like to add that in some chapters i enjoyed this Fiction and i would like it to get better and i would like you to become a better Author because overall your Grammar is 7/10 (you have some mistakes in your chapters if you have free time you should go over and proofread it) and Story telling is above average your execution just needs some work to make your story one worth telling.
    First off you MC just has it so easy that it gets predictable this is the cycle of your story
    Random person attacks/trys to get into a fight with the MC > They fight the MC wins > More people arrive to try and help the Random People > MC narrowly wins or just losses and gets away > Random Power level up > MC goes back for revenge and then for some reason you add this random side character little paragraph. Also like to add the whole every problem he has he can fix it with whats inside the ring which makes me so frustrated there needs to be limitations.
    Your Character development is fairly bad especially your side characters they're so terribly laid out, Let's use Riol as an example before chapter 11 there was no mention of a Friend and then suddenly you get this character shoved in your face which is fairly normal but the thing that gets to me is the fact of their suddenly best friends (you should of at least mentioned him in the earlier chapters then slowly integrated him into the Fiction)
    The fact that you can skip over things really annoys me like the whole eating thing only got recently mentioned in i think it was chapter 17? and it was barely noticeable the fact tha