Age of cultivation
Self-Published
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Description
What would happen if the world around you see and feel would have a hidden side, one of magic and mistery. And what would happen if this side suddenly came to light when the normal world was nearly destroyed?Arun was born in such a world, 20 years after the emergence of the cultivation world and fall of the technological one.He dreams of one day becoming the best cultivator and leading the development of the new age, the age of cultivation.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Siron
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.1/ 5.0
- Followers
- 33
- Views
- 31,061
Chapters(28 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- BytefluxRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Let me preface this with saying, that the this story has potential. The author has potential.
However the author has a long road ahead of him, to improve his word-smithing skill.
The grammar and spelling make it evident, that the author isn't a native english speaker. Not only are there a lot of general errors, but there wording makes it seem as if the story wasn't taking place in a modern setting.
The character seems flat and there's a lot of room for improvement there.
However I feel like the author has promise and the issues with this story and his writing are ones, that can be learned with time.
It is obviously evident, though, that the author has the the talent to make it as a writer in the future. All he is missing is experience and teachers. I will not be continueing with this story, but do hope, that the author revisits this story a couple of years down the line and makes literature just a little bit better with his additions.
To the author directly: Please don't give up. You have what it takes, even though it is evident, that you need more years under your belt, before that happens. Don't let that discourage you, though, please! You are a diamond in the very rough, but a diamond nonetheless. :)