After War

Self-Published

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Description

Long after humanity had discovered the secret to faster-than-light travel and had spread out into the universe the last great war was fought over how to divide and rule the galaxy. During the war, breakthroughs in the speed of communication and travel made future wars all but ridiculous to fight. Generations of humans lived and died never knowing of life with the possibility of experiencing any war.

A young college Sophomore has a bad breakup with her boyfriend of six years and in a fit of anger and grief drives her car through a portal only to discover a shocking secret from the great war over five thousand years earlier.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Xian Piete

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.6/ 5.0
Followers: 5
Views: 5,862

Chapters(25 total)

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earthdrakeRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
Good grammar, 2.5d characters but they all just blur together as they act mostly the same.
The premise is good but it quickly becomes childish and fairly stupid. It is a decent read if you want something to kill some time but nothing revolutionary.
there are several military personnel involved and where there is military personnel there are regulations too however something even the novel acknowledges but they are frankly strange in more ways than one.
also the author should check some of the physics involved as there are several things that are slightly or way off.
all in all the novel is not very well prepared and even with the glaring plot errors the characters feels a bit off, even more considering there is something of a brave new world situation.
there is a black hole involved which destroys almost all of the plot because is just not, there is also perceptive time travel which is also poorly understood by the auhor.