Aether, Book One: Fugitive

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

Years ago, the world was thrown into chaos when meteors, full of a mysterious energy called Aether, rained from the sky. Destroying cites, mutating plants and animals, and thrusting humanity into a gold rush to harvest this new energy, and the creatures it mutates, for their own gain.

Under the strain of competition for this new resource, and dealing with an emerging class of sentient animals popping up around the globe, the governments of the world collapse. Leaving private corporations to reign free over the land as warlords of the new world.

And then there is Rachel Ross; a young internet star, who became a military scout when her pet birds, Aristide and Talia, were drafted into a military mutation program; turning them into large, intelligent, fighting birds called Divs. The name given to organisms who diverge from the normal evolutionary path through Aether.

Now Rachel is on the run, abandoned by her children when she refuses to keep fighting in the constant wars and power struggles over Aether. Seeking only to be left alone, and to reconnect with her family and friends, including Aristides and Talia, and get back to making videos.

But it appears some people just can't leave well enough alone...

Disclaimers:

Chapter Frequency: I'm experimenting with creating a backlog by posting one chapter every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday so if there is ever a delay, you guys don't notice. Let me know which style you prefer, one arc all at once, or one chapter at a time.

Chapter Length: I try to keep chapters between 1500-2000 words. But as I get better, that number will probably increase.

Binge Preference: I plan for 9-10 chapters per arc, or part, as I call them in my notes. Each part is made to read like its own little novella.

ALSO: I'm currently building my platform and working on publishing my novel. So there will be a bit of delay for the final act. Currently looking for writer friends / critique partners etc for any advice for the transition in becoming a professional writer (services I might be able to offer, best places or strategies for marketing, side gigs I can take on while this is in the publishing process, other platforms I can use, etc.)

Hey look at this! A Patreon page. patreon.com/uhnari

I can't afford to write for free, so if you like my work, consider supporting me so I don't have to get a real job. Literally, any small amount of money helps immensely.

Chapters(46 total)

Reviews

No reviews yet. Be the first to share your thoughts!

Community Reviews(1)

  • Luca DRRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    For me it's the setting, the characters and the novelty of it all that makes this novel really stand out!
    Let's begin with the setting. What do you think about post-apocalyptic dystopia with a hint of cyberpunk without the neons but with the mechas, and a touch of magic hinted at here and there? What about characters mysterious and compelling that make you want to read more and find out who they are, what they did and how their mutual relationship will evolve?
    It's gripping, tight and compelling. The first three chapters are a bit rough in my opinion, the narration set in the present tense and with some grammar mistakes. The font is also jarring. Move past all of this, because by chapter four we have a solid story that stand up on its own feet and is a pleasure to read. The descriptions are interesting and very original, with cool words that make me feel like i'm right there with the characters running away from the big bad robots!
    This is where the novel shines. The story takes the slow approach compared to other stories on this website, but do not be fooled! It's still enjoyable and a lot happens in every chapter, never making you feel like what you just read is a filler and a waste of time. My rule of thumb is that if I skip paragraphs, then the story is mid. Paragraphs skipped on this story: none.
    Give it a read, and don't mind the low stars. I think many readers got scared by the first chapters, which do need a rewrite, but it's worth soldiering through them!