Abominable King

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(Rebooted version Synopsis)

I was just a man like any other, until I got sucked into a world that wants me dead. I can’t think of a reason why they want me dead, aside from the fact that I command a massive army of the unliving and have the reputation of being the embodiment of evil. Between a character I had created in my youth who wants nothing less than to conquer the world in my name, a force made up of unholy monstrosities and the Forces of Light constantly trying to kill me, how am I to live peacefully or find a way back home and will I even want to by the end of my journey? I will do what is needed and fight for survival, even if it means becoming what the slanderous rumors about me proclaim as truth. The reign of darkness has come again on this fantasy world, and all who try to fight me will face the wrath of the Abominable King.

(I did not make the art.)

(WARNING! THIS NOVEL CONTAINS CONTENT THAT IS NOT SUITABLE FOR YOUNG READERS! IF YOU ARE UNDER 16-21 OR HAVE ISSUES WITH INTENSE DEPICTIONS OF CRUELTY AND/ OR OTHER NSFW CONTENT, THEN KNOW THAT YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!)

(There are acts and opinions in this novel that I do not condone. Read at your own peril and watch out for depictions of violence, cruelty, evil in the extreme and more.)

(Updates every Saturday at 8:00AM when not on Haitus.)

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
ianisomega

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICANTI-HERO LEADSUPERNATURALSTRONG LEADMALE LEADHORRORREINCARNATIONGRIMDARKHIGH FANTASYSTRATEGY

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.1/ 5.0
Followers
448
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542,065

Chapters(317 total)

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Community Reviews(8)

  • toolazytobreatheRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The story is about undead king version 2.0.  Version 1.0 was full of bugs and due to blue screen error has shut down.System administrator (nickname god)after optimizing the source code with a patch named MC rebooted the system. Due to the database failure the MC had a problem with access to the archives( memories of the undead king version 1.0), but after a while the devs repaired the code and everything is working fine.
    Ok some of this is true, but sadly there are no system administrators and devs in this story.
    I'm sucker for kingdom building stories. Yes the MC is OP, yes the enemies are weak, but it's a good story well written and quite interesting so give it a chance.
  • Heart-burstRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Not really a complicated book, but really fun to read I spend a full day reading the 90 chapters and it was really untertaining (Sry not native English) it's not one of the best story I read but really worth the time I spend
    The plot didn't seem forced at all to me it's logical in it's developpement, there is no really a bad wtf moment where you don't understand wtf is going on, the only wtf there is are funny ones so no problem there
    I was not troubled by the errors if there were any, therefor if there were some they are minor ones
    so please continue writing🙏, like that I can do my part and continue reading😂
  • TekknosRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    do wish the paragraphs where smaller for an easyer read and where is the game stats LitRPG? the only thing that is close was one part with the building choices
  • WartechRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    I wouldn't call this story neither good nor bad. It's kinda meh (at least for me)..
    Main points which I didn't like: story felt somewhat rushed and interactions between characters I would call just a bare minimum.
  • kaoRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    I could only get up to that chapter 13 before I had to bail.
    Look. I LOVE these kinds of stories: transmigrated op mc of questionable moral characters vs the world. Read that stuff all the time in Wuxia novels on Webnovel site. Love that stuff.
    Your story started off good. Then...you started using more 'telling' about the events between chapter 9 - 13 instead of showing.
    I felt like I was reading a historical blurb instead of being knee deep in the trenches with the poor slobs and with the MC. So I was losing touch with the pace of the story. I hate stories that does more 'tell' and less 'show'.
    TELL : One this day, the Japanese sent planes and their xth fleet to bomb Pearl Harbor. As a result it would lead the Americans to join the raging fires of war.
    SHOW: Seaman Carl Weinstein was hanging out with his buddies on the naval pier fishing. They were on Christmas week leave. Popping a beer, he turned to his buddy, and was about to ask about the Christmas party that night. When he heard the familiar sound of a plane getting closer. "That's odd, I thought there were regulations against flying so close to the navy yards?" He said to his friend Jackson Hughman. Jackson looked back and then his eyes widened in fear! "Dive! dive!" and Jackson dove off the pier. Just as the sounds of plane strafed by with the wing guns. Carl didn't make it in time and was cut in two. Later Jackson would find his friend's body and remember that America joined the war after this dark day.
    One is TELLing and the other is SHOWing. You really should rewrite those chapters. It kills the mood by making me feel I am slogging through a history class. Instead of living through history.
    I'll give you 3 stars. I could change that later if you have an edited version later.
  • SandsforeverRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    Everything felt flat while reading it and I love the idea and premise
    The problem for me was the characters and how bland it was I can read garbage if I like the main cast
    I wanted to like this...
  • HickupsRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    This might be the most pure example of a powerfantasy I have ever encountered on this site.
    Pointlessly op mcs with backgrounds so edgy they cut steel who spend their time stomping opponents who are obnoxious stereotypes or dumbed down to carricatures. The remainder is spent circle-jerking to their superiority or chuuny-esque musings about morality. That's right, weeb fanservice is part of the package. I'm still half-expecting for this to turn into a slice of life demon lord novel.
    The grammar is fine and mistakes are few but many of the chapters are long-winded, repetitive infodumps, contrasted by fights without real tension. Worldbuilding consists mostly of bastardized clones of former countries and is pretty bland but it fits the narrative.
    The problem I see is this novel running out of steam eventually. Mainly because conquest for world domination isn't really that impressive when it's done by a god, especially since there are no real antagonists and thus no real challenges.
    This story is clearly not to my tastes but it might be to yours. If you enjoy the things mentioned above, go check it out and leave a rating.
    To the author: you've created...something and it resonates. You should be proud of it, keep going and improve and experiment.
    Cheers
    PS: I still can't shake the notion of this being satire, except I haven't been made to laugh yet.
  • vladeragRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    I lost interest in this story very quickly.  While the premise seemed interesting, I came to dislike the main character by the second chapter.  The way he turned on a dime from being a morally upright human being to murdering the shit out of a bunch of people...  The way he has - intentionally - cringeworthy edginess...  I suppose the point is power fantasy, but it really seems like the main character was just waiting to snap or be given a chance - any chance - to go nuts and kill people.