A virtual reality game according to a martial artist otaku

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2015

Author

tealover

• Chapter 16
  Nov 13, 2015
• Chapter 15
  Nov 11, 2015
• Chapter 14
  Nov 9, 2015
• Chapter 13
  Nov 9, 2015
• Chapter 12
  Nov 6, 2015
• Chapter 11
  Nov 4, 2015
• Chapter 10
  Nov 2, 2015
• Chapter 9
  Nov 2, 2015
• Chapter 8
  Nov 2, 2015
• Chapter 7
  Nov 2, 2015
• Chapter 6
  Nov 2, 2015
• Chapter 5
  Nov 2, 2015
• Notice/ rant
  Oct 25, 2015
• Chapter 4
  Oct 23, 2015
• Chapter 3
  Oct 23, 2015
• Chapter 2
  Oct 23, 2015
• Chapter 1
  Oct 21, 2015
• Prologue
  Oct 19, 2015

Reviews

Community Reviews(4)

• sabethunder8Royal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Well The story wasn't that bad but if you don't turn the theme to light it's almost impossible to read, it hurts my eyes.
• RevelashRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  In this VR fiction we get a slew of references to many animes and mangas which for a time is a fun little addition to the story, but they eventually become grating with multiple references a chapter and even stealing characters from other sources. This story is heavily influenced by the large amounts of references the author makes and the originality that one might see (Like the magic system) is quickly suffocated by the overuse of references and just ends up becoming an irritating read with nothing more to offer than a slew of references.
  P.S. FFS the character names himself Kira(Death Note reference) and his real name is John Doe, the author didn't even bother to think of a name for his own character or his side characters.
  P.P.S. If you can deal with the endless amount of references and the fact that the author doesn't really come up with anything on his own then you might enjoy this story; I couldn't put up with it so I wrote a review to warn others in case they get irritated with shit like this.
• grinderotaRoyal Road

  ★ 1.0

  Change the Font color of the first 10 or else not many will read your story....at least for myself, I don't plan on worsening my eyes just for a fiction....unless you don't care about that and are  only writing for fun...in that case xD why are posting it here
• Icewolf88Royal Road

  ★ 0.5

  Black text on greyish black background is hard and annoying to read. starts at chapter 2 and continues to chapter 10 ( last chapter at this point).
  due to the black on black I was forced to stop reading at chapter 2 so I cant get a feel of the story, plot, characters etc.
  change back to white text and you may have hope in the future.