A very Bunny Point of View (Isekai Parody gone Wrong, gone Bun’ed!)

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2023

Author

fakerdakerhahaha

• 1.23. Culture Schock
  Oct 30, 2023
• 1.22. Pot, meet Kettle
  Oct 29, 2023
• 1.21. Pot and Kettle
  Oct 28, 2023
• 1.20. Walk in the Wood
  Oct 27, 2023
• 1.19. Leaving the Nest
  Oct 26, 2023
• 1.18. Our Talk before The Journey
  Oct 25, 2023
• 1.17. A Storm before The Calm
  Oct 25, 2023
• 1.16. Predictable Predicament (part 2)
  Oct 24, 2023
• 1.16. Predictable Predicament (part 1)
  Oct 24, 2023
• 1.15. Due Punishment
  Oct 23, 2023
• 1.14. Eventual Payback
  Oct 23, 2023
• 1.13. Out of Luck
  Oct 22, 2023
• 1.12. Hardly Harmless
  Oct 22, 2023
• 1.11. Alluded Adoption
  Oct 21, 2023
• 1.10. Tricky Trade
  Oct 21, 2023
• 1.9. Tale worth Telling (part 2)
  Oct 20, 2023
• 1.9. Tale worth Telling (part 1)
  Oct 20, 2023
• 1.8. Advancing Plot
  Oct 19, 2023
• 1.7. Character Development
  Oct 19, 2023
• 1.6. Harrowing Harvest (part 2)
  Oct 18, 2023

Reviews

Community Reviews(3)

• Aest BelequaRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I read and reviewed the original as part of a review swap and am reposting my original review.
  "A Very Bunny Point of View", as of Chapter Nine, is an often funny story mocking the Isekai/portal fantasy genre. It features a main character who's both not the "hero" of the story and also not aware that she's in a story at all, a hero who seems almost secondary to the main story, and a solid storyline for the not-hero to walk.
  Style: Most of the time, I found the style in Very Bunny fun and light. My one complaint is the length of Chapter 6, an action-heavy chapter, which made it hard to keep the whole of the action in my head.
  Story: I think the unclear nature of the not-hero's quest makes total sense given that not only is the MC not the hero, but she's not aware there's a quest to have to be on at all. She's simply documenting her life with this strange boy who just showed up one day, and it works well.
  Grammar: I couldn't find any major errors. I didn't go over things with a fine-tooth comb, but it looked solid.
  Character: Bun`Isa is a fun narrator, and many of the other animal-people have solid personalities and motivations. Hiro, the, well, hero of the story is also well-written as an Isekai'd victim who's being sheltered by the people who found him rather than going right off on his quest. His reluctance/inability to go on that quest makes for some funny interactions with Bun'Isa.
• OzFiefenRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  [Review posted again since the fiction was relaunched]
  Pardon the bun. "A very Bὕnny Point of View" is a really charming read so far, with a whimsy and humour that pops out of the page which adds to the otherworldliness of the setting. It is an isekai after all, though with a focus on animals and nature. It is a bit like "what if animals evolved to be like humans?". Except for Hiro, the 'regular human' of the story, the rest of the characters thus far are (maybe) human-looking people with accessories and 'limbs'(?) that match the animal counterpart they represent, and presumably also capabilities related to those animals as well. Bun`Isa, the narrator of the story, is a bὕnny as mentioned in the title and she has paws and is focused on kicking and jumping like a bunny—which is totally different from a Bὕnny, of course. Although, perhaps the more usual fantasy races also exist...? Well, there is a pretty big explosive example early on and it really plays with your expectations.
  Style - The writing style uses a first-person perspective, however not from the perspective of the isekai'd person, Hiro, but of someone living in this another world, Bun`Isa. This creates an interesting reading experience where the narrator is more knowledgeable than both the reader and the character that is supposed to represent the reader. Everything is seen through the lens of somebody who already lives in the world, and so the world-building comes in a unique form; Bun`Isa teaching a class of kids for example of the history of their world, or teaching Hiro about the setting they are in. Because the story is told from the perspective of someone who already kinda knows everything, and therefore already has opinions on things, we get humorous situations that arise from the difference in what the reader (and subsequently Hiro) understand as normal, and what Bun`Isa has come to understand as normal. There are also quite a number of puns thrown into the narrative which builds up the whimsy of t
• wintry ducklingRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  There was some very interesting worldbuilding in what I've read so far of this story, and the concept overall — the maps, systems of hierarchy involved, etc. — is quite cool.
  Style (5/5): the writing flows well. I like the balance of description. Some people might like more vivid imagery, but I feel like this story is more plot-driven, and gives some imagery where needed.
  Story (4.5/5): the concept is easy to grasp and charming (I thought the part about the abacus was really funny hehe where the boy was just figuring out where/when the heck he was). Some parts can be a little confusing, as this story uses a lot of elements and concepts together that aren't commonly seen in one, but after reading through it the story structure starts to come together.
  Grammar (5/5): Didn't find any issues with grammar! Well-edited :)
  Character (4.5/5): the narrating Bunny (idk how to get that special symbol hehe) is kinda clueless, but I think it's just their personality. I like the character of Hiro, who is intelligent, curious, and tenacious. We'll see where the character relationships go as the story progresses!
  Cool, unique read with a comfy feel and lots of irony (and puns hehe)