A True Paradise

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2023

Author

Purple Life

• Chapter 02- My New Life
  Jan 6, 2023
• Chapter 01- The Beginning
  Jan 6, 2023

Reviews

Community Reviews(2)

• LyingThiefRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Hmm... from where should I start?
  This novel has been great until now, I really like the way author dealt with a story like this. The concept of a Reverse-dystopian world seems very intriguing to me and as from what I have seen in this novel until now I think that this storyline has a lot of potential.
  I like the author's writing style a lot, in the beginning of the first chapter it was kind of stiff but after that it became better and now after reading till the 5th chapter I could easily say that it has become great.
  The writing doesn't seem unnatural or forced to me either, the story does share some common traits with other fantasy novels like extremely doting parents and such but I guess that's fine.
  The grammar seems okay enough for me to not have any difficulty reading this story.
  The three important characters introduced until now, Peter, Patrick, and Kristen are very intriguing characters. The author did his best to convey everything he could about the characters and I hope to see them develop even further.
  Kristen, the protagonist's mother is my favorite character from this novel, her past as someone who wasn't able to concieve a child for long and even when she did her child ended up dying and being possessed by a soul made her story even more sympathetic and emotional for me as a reader, I look forward to how the author would deal with this development.
  As for the story, the element of dystopia is clearly visible in the story, apart from that nothing much related to magic or mystick in this case, has been explained. I hope I get to see some exciting fights and power ups as well
  The biggest problem, if I were to point out about this story, would be the info dumps, the author didn't shy away from info dumping the readers but he made sure to add jokes in between them to make them interesting, also the author's explanation about the law of equality seemed very thought out to me.
  I am very excited to see how this story will unfold, good luck to the author!
• crowrush204Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  The story is set in a reverse-dystopia world where the nobles are looked down upon. Our protagonist is a college student reincarnated in a fantasy world, and due to his former knowledge, he is talented in everything.
  In fact, too talented, which brought him some misfortune.
  Story
  The story itself is excellent and enjoyable so far. It sets up for engaging future plots or arcs, and the introductions have been done sufficiently.
  The world is somewhat unique and brings an interesting twist; the higher-ups have tried to bring equality to their people but miserably failed, as nobles almost have a disadvantage. Aside from that, the world has some fantasy traits we all know (and love).
  There is also a magic concept the author calls Mystick, which has some potential for exciting action scenes.
  My only criticism is the amount of info-dumping, but the author has done a respectable job executing them.
  Style
  As far as I'm concerned, there are few to no inconsistencies. The chronology is consistent too.
  There are a lot of flashbacks, especially to our protagonist's former life. Almost all of them are executed well, and we get a better grasp of Peter's thoughts and actions while taking up little reading time.
  There are a bunch of anime references too, which is fun to glance once in a while.
  Grammar
  There are some grammar mistakes, especially with sentence structure, but the author does a good job fixing them. They don't bother you much while reading, and the grammar improves in newer chapters.
  Characters
  The characters are lovable. Although some stereotypical traits exist, we are still too early in the story to entirely understand the characters. It will be intriguing to see how our protagonist develops in this twisted world he is reborn into.