A Hand From The Mist

In a world consumed by an unstoppable mist harboring invincible monsters, Morgan possesses the ability to recreate and control limbs, harnessing the powers of others. Together with Jeanie, a super without a body and stuck in the form of a machine spirit, they crash-land back on Earth after a failed mission to colonize Mars, finding shielded cities plagued by supervillains amidst the mist that now covers the entire planet. As they navigate alliances, confront ethical dilemmas, and harness borrowed abilities, they seek to restore balance in a world forever altered by the mist's presence.

I'm posting here hoping to get some feedback on my story and grow as a writer. I love to read and have been practicing writing for years. It would be a dream come true to do this for a living. Feel free to review and comment all your thoughts.