A Girl's, Unusual Existence

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2015

Author

esliesma

• *Chapter 6- Qi Theories
  Apr 11, 2017
• *Chapter 5 - Qi
  Apr 3, 2017
• *Chapter 4- Library
  Apr 3, 2017
• * Chapter 3- Reunion
  Apr 3, 2017
• * Chapter 2- Min Household
  Apr 3, 2017
• * Chapter 1- Birth?
  Apr 1, 2017
• Prologue - Boom *
  Dec 2, 2015

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• DragrathRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  So far this series is a strong start with an interesting main charecter with 19 chapters out so far I figured there was enough material to start a review. The concept is interesting with a former researcher who has applied the scientific method to a xania world. However There has been some anomolus behavior in the background of Ame where it is revealed she tried to mess around with a partical accelerator more or less for amusment, which is ... extreamly unplausible/expensive (those things cost billions of dollars)
  by category:
  Style-full points for introducing a relatively unique concept both in perspective, backstory and some interesting changes  to the main characters former world the world.
  Story-Can't say much here as their isn't much to rate yet as  it is still in the introductory stages
  Grammar-no major mistakes outside of maybe an occasional typo. Certainly better than I can do
  Character-character pool kept small generally only the family and Ame's personal maid, however those that have been revealed certainly have potential. MC is interesting though there are some slight discrepancies to the story in plausibility of a particular event.  Overall believably well done.
• tienunrealRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  This story borrows a lot from xianxia/wuxia style stories, however with characters more reminiscent of a lightnovel. Everything is great so far, but just like with your other story I think you could really flesh out the world. For instance when MC leaves home to go to school I did not really grasp setting-wise how much she traveled, where, and what that would mean. In fact, I would say even the chapters at home don't give much sense of place. However despite all this it is a very enjoyable story and probably the best active one on this site imo.
• tyrande1231Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Have read up to chap 17
  Style – Reading everything is smooth imo
  Story – Nothing much to say yet. Still at a world building and introductory phase.
  Grammar – Haven’t seen a grammar mistakes at all. Comma and etc.
  Character – Have introduce only atleast 11 char i think or something close to that. But only 3 character are mainly showed(yet). No irritating(irrationally annoyingly stupid) character.
  [Have lots of potential, Hoping for more update]
  As a reader(leecher) of many more rrl,xianxia,wuxia fics i recommend it for you guys to give it a try.
  [Normal Length per Chap]
  [Fast Update]
  [Humorous]
• AnarchyDevRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  An Unique perspective into the working mind of a Quirky Female Lead who was considered to be a Mad Scientist, but still a Genius. Now what would happen, if that said person is reborn in a Cultivation World where the lack of logic and Scientific Laws are just said to be the Gift from the Heavens?
  All Hell along with the Heaven breaks loose here in this story when the MC starts to Question everything and try to find the Inner Workings of all and seemingly Succeeds in it. From Modern earth Culinary  food to Video calling is rediscovered with the help of Qi and Cores...
  So basically the MC is definitely an interesting character with a "Unique" personality. The other side characters are also well developed with their own personalities and also a good background story. But still a lot can be improved since the main focus here is the MC who obviously tries to manipulate everyone and hence there's less suspense in them, but still the interaction are humorous if not repeated somewhere...
  The style is also something to be more desired since the focus is the MC, we get a lot less World Building. The world around the MC is hard to imagine and if it does gets described then it's some sort of info dump. Also the thinking process of the MC is somewhat vague or a sense of Mystery when the actions are performed by her, so there is less explanation for her actions and the process is skipped, but later on it gets revealed, so that's the Mystery part I guess. But since the story with focus to her, hope more of her actions gets know prior to doing...
  The story is something to be desired here, as all the actions till now are on the fly actions... The MC end goal also seems vague, with somewhere in between desiring wealth and power... But all the chapters till now are really enjoyable either they be her antics, her thinking, her insights, her power up... Yup she definitely has a great Power Upto OPness...
  Grammer in terms of readbility and understanding is Great, but if in terms of no mis
• alicornfaterRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  +The story is quite interesting, my personal favorite. Relative logical world, enjoyable style.
  +If you like thinking deep inside the story you will like it.
  -There are some "I forgot to mention" moments (post-filled holes)
  -The target audience is small, but are junkies. (I'm one of them)
  -You'll hate everyone and givu up life (just kidding. or not.)
• pixel_dragonovRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  Dear Overlord,
  This lowly one has been silently reading your stories since you first began. I was quite impressed how you managed to manipulate so many tropes without coming off as overly-cliche, and even managed to create a flavor unique to your own. Truth be told, I enjoyed your stories even more than thousands of chapters of repetitive xianxia amd wuxia. You had given us not only an interesting main character, you had also graced us with supporting characters with the life I never found in all those xianxias and wuxias. At this point, oh Overlord, you know now where I am going.
  This story for me had been an oasis from all the macabre pieces that I read, it served as a sanctuary for the mind of someone who is living in a place filled with fire, lead, and chaos. But no more.
  I had been misled by the lack of the tragedy tag and had gravely underestimated the gruesome consequences brought forth by your foreshadowings. I made the mistake, dear Overlord, of trusting that you would not stoop so low; that the great Overlord would not be as infantile to desecrate her own work and devolve her story into one of sheer depravity.
  When I read that chapter, I felt cold, not mentally, not emotionally: My body shivered in cold in spite of the agonizing heatwave pestering the tropics. I felt lost, betrayed.
  Your trial of fire was indeed too trying.
  I apologize sincerely, for I had seen how much the Great One lamented and labored for her brain-child, and I know that this lurker of a minion holds no right to disparage you, let alone criticize one as gracious as you. But this one cannot still his mind so easily, and must say this piece before I once more retreat to the shadows.
  This minion gave thee his heart, and thoust shattered it.
• PrettyBoyJinnRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  Amazing story,BUT
  dam those chapters... those chapters made me take a break from this story for 2 weeks. Came back read more, BUT
  their came another chapter. My heart, feelings, my mentality is lost and gone. I feel like ive been brain gangbanged by a group of black dudes. My mind cannot continue...
  ANYWAYS
  give this story a shot, hehe. Im just a person who likes perfect stories A.K.A a pussy
• jacobpaigeRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  I made it to chapter 42 before giving up on this series. Its somewhat better written than your average OP wankfest, but its clear that the author doesn't really have a goal for the series and that tends to create plot holes, logical inconsistencies and hanging plot threads. The author also doesn't seem to have an interest in improving if the abuse of puncutuation and misuse of vocabulary, in spite of multiple reviews pointing the problem out, are anything to go by. Its not as bad as many of the series on this site, but I favor those looking to improve their flaws over those that expect you to ignore them.
• shinigami12659Royal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  Post the old version in another fiction page please
• eskamobob1Royal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  So the story currently up is a rewrite of a previous story. Over all I like the story, but I feel the rewrite is over all lower quality than the original. Many of the repeated scenes lack the depth they did before, and the over all character development is significantly lacking compared to the original. I do like the story line of the latter a bit better, but the way it is written is distinctly lower quality be it writing style, story depth, or even just the proof reading.