A Cure for Magic

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Description

The World is not what it was, magic is real, sickness has ravaged its people and technology is responsible. Willow and her friends have been living in peace that is soon to be disturbed. The world has changed more than even their parents thought. An evil of years past has found them, and with it something more has begun to move. A door is opening leading to a place both ancient and miraculous. A place that holds a connection to earths past and will rewrite truth and legends.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Rona Johnston

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 2.7/ 5.0
Followers: 8
Views: 8,572

Chapters(31 total)

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ManaWeiRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
You have a really good idea going, but you need a more thorough punctuation.
Your sentences are long, so the lack of punctuation makes it very muddy, and hard to read.
Should also split up the sections a bit, it is literally like a wall of text, and it's difficult to navigate if your concentration slips just a little.. I have had to read the same thing more than once, on more than one occasion, because I got distracted.
Otherwise great story.