9001: A Dungeon Ship Odyssey

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Description

Leah Binoli is a recent graduate of the Magic Academy of her world. Living in one of the hundreds of colonized worlds of the Galactic empire, this young human girl dreams of being the greatest space traveling adventure, named Space Cadets. To her luck, or by fates intervention, she finds a winning lottery ticket for a prize of 25,000 which is enough for a ship. In the world, like in all the galaxy, dungeons also exist and as time went by the were capable of being tamed. With her new found wealth she purchases a newborn core which instead of bringing her takes her to heaven, it annoys her to hell.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2015
Author: VRDraco

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.7/ 5.0
Followers: 21
Views: 6,608

Chapters(31 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

Daedracian Rokanth DraknithRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I lack the ability to comment on the grammar of this story because I lack the knowledge to do so. And so I have defaulted to five stars for grammar, as a completed book can always be edited to grammatical perfection if the author so desires.
I based my assessment of the style of this story, on the fact that it is written more as an autobiography, than a work of fiction. This detract from the story for me as I was never truly bored by the story as a whole.
My assessment of the story is well. Something that has filled my head with the idea to copy and paste the story into a text program and then slowly edit it with care. Once I have that I hope to rewrite it as my story, while leaving only the barest of skeletons of the story I copied it from. Leaving Just enough of the originals concepts in, to be able to draw comparisons on where its inpirations come from.
My take on the Main character: While he is a very bland character I believe he holds more character than any autobiography has ever had. (despite my lack of knowledge on the subject.) The reason for this assumption is due to the fact that an autobiographer, will only ever have memorys and whatever they choose to dig up for there source materials for the autobiography. While this story has the freeedom to be written with as much detail as the writer could want as it appears to be a work of fiction. This allows the author to give a more detailed look at the state of the world, and the state of the characters enviroments, while also allowing them to write anything they want the characters to think or do.
All in all this review was written by a Casaul Reader, with the refinement of a plebian. Who lacks the energy and ability to do an indepth review!
DarkereRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I like this story very much till now (7 Chapters out). There seems to be alot of potential for a really good story. No complains about the characters for now the MC still seems a bit one dimensonal but thats expected with how much is written.
The only thing i would really recommend is an editor and the author should look over what would be corrected it seems alot of mistakes in grammar could be easily fixed. (then =/= than for example) While I am not bothered too much by bad grammar I can see that posing problems for some people.
ErmaroliRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
A very fast paced short story on the directive the smartest person on the planet would take.
If you had an ungodly thirst for knowledge and comprehended everything you saw, read and heard, wouldn't you want to find out how far you could go? As far as you wanted to go. Knowing someone that capable would only push you to help them.
It had me on the edge of my seat as I kept reading trying to figure out what the mc was trying to do. I honestly am a little bit glad it was this short because I would not have been able to stop reading otherwise.
JoaquinRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
no hay nada mas que decir.
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RiciclRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This was a fairly fast read for me, however I still appreciate reading it. The story has an interesting concept that I think was explored well. I didn't remember reading any stories with a similar concept, but I'll always remember this one. It was a touching story and I think is deserving of this rating.
SoopersoopRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I love this idea of a universe filled with dungeons it has so much potential and I can’t wait to read more as the chapters come out keep up the good work
wills1999Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Will you pick up this novel again or has it been dropped but from what I see it's a good novel so please do continue the good work you've started
UltrabenosaurusRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Being part of the Den I was able to access this since VRDraco started writing a week or two ago, and have read up to chapter 8. It's a very interesting and fairly unique idea, good chapter lengths, a setting with lots of potential, and good characters with decent depth.
Being about magic and dungeons there's lots of fun fights as you'd expect, but also with the modern conveniences of TV and spaceships. VRDraco seems to have combined these aspects quite well, especially with the premise of how they use "tamed" dungeon cores and magic crystals in their tech. Up to the point I read only the two MCs and the first add-on character have been introduced and they're all good fun in their own way. I won't say much about them because spoilers, but I will warn you not to take them at face value especially at the beginning.
If there's one negative thing to point out it's that the grammar isn't perfect, but VRDraco's native language isn't English and it's really not that bad. As you'll know if you've read any of his other stuff it's plenty readable and should only be a turn off for major grammar nazis.
Over all I love this, and I hope you will as well.
P.S. I'm the guy who named the chapters, at least until chapter 8. I have no intention of editing this if I stop for any reason, so just assume it's all me.
MoridainRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
An interesting story based on the dungeon lord premise that has become recently popular. For the first time a dungeon takes to the stars!
I like the main character, who first comes off as a bit of a naive weakling but quickly shows she is actually a surprisingly mature and kickass adventurer.
I would give this story five stars, except I have some issues with the personality of the Tony entity running the dungeon core. He goes from a wild and uncontrolable genius to a near passive neet within a few chapters with very little explanation. It is a bit jarring...
There is also some grammar issues, but not enough to bother me personally.
Still very worth reading though. I hope it continues for a long time. :)
burfRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
A unique and fun take on traditional sci-fi and fantasy stories. the main characters are well fleshed out with a good backstory, even one of the most annoying MC’s that I have come across becomes more understood as his backstory is revealed.
The grammar is lacking however I understand that english is not the authors first language so it is understandable, well worth the time to read and cant wait for more chapters to follow