21 Blades: Revelations

Self-Published

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Description

Demons thrive while Angels sleep.

Twenty one blades were created for Earth. Each holding its own unique power. An epic battle amongst the keepers of the blades has been waged since their creation, hidden from an unknowing world. Is this just another good versus evil fight? Or is there more to the Hunters and the Brotherhood than meets the eye...When Nathan, Sophie, Jake, Paige and Ben a recruited by the brotherhood, their minds, bodies, and very souls are put to the test. Do they have what it takes to survive in this harsh reality? Do they have what it takes to survive each other?

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2022
Author
JDonnell

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.8/ 5.0
Followers
28
Views
19,996

Chapters(43 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

  • AmyjoyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Great story, easy read, drew me in straight away into another world. I loved the characters in the story especially Nathan in his journey with the blades. I can't wait for the next installment to see where they go next. I have read the whole book on another platform and I'd highly recommend it.
  • Pudding_bowlRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I've never read a story quite like this one, the premise is unique. The story is told from different characters perspectives and the grammar is perfect, I never find any spelling or grammar issues in the chapters. The reading is easy enough, no need to grab a thesaurus, suitable for audiences including the young adult. the character development is ongoing and new characters are being added, lots of solid world building happening in regards to the plot and network of characters. The best part is that all characters are unique in their own right and they don’t all eventually become the same character in their behaviour and responses like u find in some writings. Author regularly posts new chapter roughly once a week that I look forward to as the story is new and different and not like other stories here on RR. The plot is coming along nicely and I'm hooked in hard now. Can’t wait to see what other blades there are, given it’s called 21 blades… there is still A lot more characters to develop and world building to happen. I am loving it. It’s not a classic op mc at this stage as the pov switches throughout and the mc with his overpowered swords has lost one recently and he doesn’t really understand them yet. I don’t think an op mc is this authors style though so I look forward to seeing how it develops going forwards.
  • SparticaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    A great story with a unique premise! Character development is great and the story is captivating! Can't wait to see what happens next! Swords that gift their powers for a selected few to use? That is awesome idea and one that I look forward to being built upon
    This would be a great platform for a TTRPG!
  • ginapedrottiRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    There is a lot of world building in this story, lots of items of power and the characters are all their own people with their own point of view, often chapters are written in the perspective of different characters. Nobody is overpowered but the Mc has obtained the op blades and I'm excited to see how it'll turn out once he masters them. The grammar is on point. Really well written, very well edited, and everything seems nicely thought out. So far it's all been setting up the world and premise and story, I'm hooked at this point to see what happens. It seems likely this is a book 1 of many given how much information is being given and how much more there is to encounter. I can't wait to see what happens next. The premise of swords that give power is new and really fun. A really neat idea that is being developed really well and appears to have been really well thought out. The book sometimes reads from other characters perspectives which gives it a young adult feel, and there is nothing so far that would indicate this shouldn't be also shared with younger readers as it seems appropriate for all ages. The writers style is a good balance between description and getting to the point. The story is of a high quality and I would recommend it to all!
  • VezaxlRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Quality grammar, plot still developing but solid. Characters all very different and deep. A bit more background would be nice but so far so good👍. I would like a POV chapter for the teachers as that would help give us an idea for the mc's overarching goal (if he has one). On that note I think that although this story is still very short it could use some more foreshadowing and a goal for the mc
  • vvmonstarRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    How good was this?! So good!!
    This was such easy reading, interesting and with a good plot to follow! Make it a series!
    The author does a good job of mixing up the language to ensure the reader doesn't get bored. Grammar was top notch too. So hard to put down, definitely want more!