Zero Tansmigrator

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

If Avah Striken had to describe his life, he would not forget to mention how it is full of "character development plots".

On his 3rd birthday, his parents' company almost went bankrupt and life was harsh for a few years before it became smooth again thanks to their efforts.

Then came his 13th birthday. Humanity almost went extinct on that day and the world was on the verge of an ending at that time. Those few years were a living hell before peace was restored due to the persistence of mankind.

Today was his 23rd birthday and he woke up in a different place in the universe as a different man. Transmigrating into such a bizarre world where everything above and beneath could kill you was not a thoughtful birthday present at all.

What to expect:

Once OP MC (strongest awakened in his world) transmigrates into a novel he has just started reading as an extra who couldn't even become one of the second male leads because he was too lazy to try.

He only wants to regain his awakened abilities or equivalent aiming to survive until the end by being carried by the main characters. But, will things really go his way?

- An everything bagel of litRPG, transmigration, regressing, Gods and Eldritch Gods.

- The system and litRPG elements are first introduced inChapter 8/9.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: unlivingThings

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 12
Views: 3,836

Chapters(11 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

DangerousDDRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
The conviction of the author is there. He has a vision of a great world and story, but as he mentioned at the start of the story, English is not his first language. The story is only slow-paced due to exposition. I don't know any fix or easy fix for writing a story in a second language—must be tough. The only thing I can think of is to continue to read and write.
The style is quite unconventional. Which is good—I like different things! But unfortunately, the jumps between dialogue, exposition, and action need more fluidity. A challenge to do in a second language.
The story and plot are intriguing—learning how Ava will survive as a side character in a book he read. He is doing the smart things—looking for power and strength and avoiding the typical tropes that might get him killed as a plot device for the main character. The needle in Ava's side is that he doesn't know exactly what happens to Ava in the book.
The characters in the first seven episodes are fine—quite basic, as each of them has distinguishable personalities. It's possibly too early for an in-depth story for all of them to shine. Ava and Nad shine the most. Too much exposition of the character's backstory could hurt revealing unique and sudden traits of said character later on but could also be used as a unique foreshadowing.
Kudos for writing in a second language! Must be difficult.
TismonRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I'd like to begin by saying that the story and the premise of the story is solid, we have the MC explore an entire new world, and we get to follow him as he adjusts to his new life in a relaxing pace for the first few chapters. If you can ignore the odd phrasing or grammatical errors here, then it is most certainly worth it to check out.
Once again, the biggest issue that may get in the way of readers is the language. The author stated that English is not his first language, and it does show in some strangely worded phrases now and then. The sentences are perfectly understandable, however, and does not really detract too much from the story he is trying to tell, so if you can overlook this then I would definitely recommend reading further.
I hope you come back to edit and finish this work, because the ideas you have are excellent!