Youko! (Experiencing a Rewrite)
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Description
(This Novel is being rewritten. Please check back again later)
Any progress on the novel has been terminated until my College exams are over. Regardless of this fact, the novel has not been cancelled. Please check back again at a future date.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- Citsune
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- Rating
- 4.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 355
- Views
- 6,790
Chapters(2 total)
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Community Reviews(6)
- Halowolf 117Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0Hey Friend,
Brilliant story that is really original in a konosuba kinda way. Love the reasoning behind the rencarnation, makes goddess-chan more 3 dimensional and not sympelly a plot divice. I hope it helps with your diression.
From someone who's attempted suicide before don't do it, it will only make you feel worse and amplifie any anxiety you have. Advice from a friend, don't try suicide it will only make things worse.
Your sincerely
HaloWolf - JahyayaRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Good mc, nice fluff. Thumbs up!
I like the mc's sniper and the book is amusing so far. - JeanDRaccRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Grammar: Fluffs by itself, no not fluffing errors except i, but it can be corrected easily.
Style: The fluffiest!
Characters: 1 fluff, 2 fluffs, 3 fluffs...
Story: A chaos of fluff with trust and fluff. You may be fluffy crying at a point to then be fluffy happy at the other, share the fluff to others, become fluffier for every moment.
Conclusion: Fluffy makes me stuffy. I roll over all and then go for pizza. Because I need my fluffy dose. - KindofbutsomewhatokayRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Well first, the title of the novel threw me off - I didn't expect to encounter the high-quality reading material I did when delving into the book. I just expected to read a chapter or two then continue to find something else to use my time on. However, I quickly started getting hooked due to the care and style the author puts in their story.
Another thing that threw me off was the description of the main character in the first chapter, pre-reincarnation. It sounded like something that'd come straight out of a tumblr OC, but I ignored it and kept reading. Glad I did, honestly.
Laid in bed for an hour or two straight, reading all of it. I thoroughly enjoyed a lot of the book, it offers a lot, and I recomend you do too. To the author, perhaps a more fitting title would benefit you in garnering interest. You do you, though.
Well, anyway, an actual review.
Character Development - Excellent. Only 14 chapters and the diverse set of characters that have been introduced are their own characters. Though it has been done to a point, I don't feel as if the main character has thoroughly realized or acted as if they are in the reality that they are in. It wasn't done poorly, just not expertly.
Story Development - So far, the story has built itself up for a conflict and setting. On chapter 14, story progression hit the ground running. Very excited for next chapter, honestly. The author put a lot of effort into building up to what they want, and it's easily noticable. It makes the conflict that much more interesting.
Grammar - I've noticed nigh-nothing. On an even better note, the chapters are immensely long, which I can always personally get behind.
Overall, an immensely enjoyable story. 5/5, because your best deserves the best.
Side Note: Citsune, you should really avoid the pitfall that is revising entire chapters over and over and over. You aren't here to write the next harry potter, are you? Think about the reason you started the novel in the first place. Mak - WerkratRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Many fluffs. The level of fluffs is nearing 10000. 11/10 fluffs.
- kisuke28Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0Great story and full of fluff. The characters are funny and the situations are too. It's too early to tell much else as we havent had much plot yet. I will update it when there's more chapters. Cant wait for more.