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Description
This a story about a young boy who was thought to be weak due to his blindness. However the people who looked down on him will soon learn the truth.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- CraftyDragon
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 1.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 5
- Views
- 1,397
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★ 1.5This is really short and it is so filled with errors in the prose and not even homophones, but just outright wrong words. The situation is not one of comedy, though I do suppose there is a slightly creepy joke thrown in at the end, but this piece just doesn't work for a short story. It is not funny and it really needs an edit.