Yggdrasil: Off The Beaten Path
Self-Published
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Description
Two Gods who could not defeat the other started a battle that would last 10,000 years. It was simple, each would create a race to battle for them.The Dragon God, Luna, created Humans.The Phoenix God, Freya, created Dungeons.Humans had to destroy all dungeons in 10,000 years. Dungeons simply had to survive.This is not a story about Humans.Nor is this a story about Dungeons.This story is about the first and last Artificial Dungeon. Created by humans in an attempt to understand dungeons better, it would be their biggest regret.This Dungeon that is not a Dungeon shaped the world. It's actions inconceivable, it would even challenge the Gods themselves.It's name, Lucifer.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- Phoenix
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.7/ 5.0
- Followers
- 23
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- 6,030
Chapters(3 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- madmatthew200Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please more please
- bubbleduckRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0An interesting concept seen before in Mystery of the Dungeon (and some other novels), but I personally prefer this take. My complaint about Mystery is the connections with his former guildmates get in the way of the story a little. It was the choice of the author to include human characters in a dungeon story and I respect that, but it didn't sit fully right with me. This story, though, so far doesn't seem to contain that.
I left a low character score because few characters have been introduced yet, and little characterization occurs.
Also, I don't have any particular complaints about the style, but it doesn't feel like a full five stars yet, perhaps as it's the author's first attempt at writing (I think? On Royal Road at least), but it's a good first start. Other than that, a solid start to a fiction.