X-men: The new era
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
This is a story of the remaining mutant new mutants right after logan the wolverine died. The continuation of story of laura and his few companions and the emergence of new mutants.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2020
- Author
- Hatred
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 70
- Views
- 1,784
Chapters(4 total)
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Community Reviews(6)
- sleepytreeRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I like this web novel.
- Veer_YouthaRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5Good Story with lots of potential. But, the writing format could use some improvement.
To the author -
1. You should use double quotes for dialogue like -
Cas: " This Is a Test dialogue. "
2. Use single quotes for thoughts like -
Jacob: ' Test thought. '
3. Skill name, Special moves name should be like -
, etc.
And that's about it, Keep up the good work... - IMalinRoyal Road★★★ 3.0Vocab needs some consideration, however the style is unique and can be brought out more through better choice of words. The idea in of itself might be able to make the story shine if presented correctly.
- Acolyte_of_cthulhuRoyal Road★★★ 2.5I am realy sorry but i just cant seem to follow the story it jumps and stuff also how it's worded it's just so weird
- Donny ClearwaterRoyal Road★★★ 2.5well I think it's got great potential but only time will tell, just be carefull on how you build the MC's journey since it's very easy to go wrong with a super powerful starting point.
- n1nj489Royal Road★ 0.5WTF, is this! I'm pretty sure I didn't follow any X-men fiction stories. I really hate when authors reuse the same fiction page to write a different story (and the author even had another story with the same name on it and looks like it's the same content too, at least the first chapter) just to get to keep the reviews and other analytics. The only time I find that justifiable is when they rewrite the history.