In the year 2020 a new dimension called Realm of Defenders was opened on Earth. It enables the rapid development of technology and more importantly the use of what can only be called magic.----Release Schedule: 1 chapter / day (7 chapters / week)

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KaellomRoyal Road

★★★★ 4.0

Great story potential, a driven character and a goal to pursue. As long as you keep it up, this story will definitely become popular.
My only issue with this story is its grammar. You tend to mix up your past tense from your present tense. If you fix that, your writing will be much better. Good luck!

PsychoRoyal Road

★★★★ 3.5

The only good thing about this fiction is that it safe? stable? Author is not likely to experiment. Grammar is relatively fine too. World building is decent.
Story and Style are main issues for me:
Style of narration is extremely dry and boring. I almost hear monotone mumbling when reading. Feels like 90% of effort went into setting, infodumps about which takes up at least half of chapters, and then as if afterthought most used up cliches were combined into the story and characters.
My question for the setting is - I can not see how particular realization of Realm of Defenders can be efficient solution to any conceivable purpose.

SovereigntyRoyal Road

★★★ 3.0

Didn't go in with high expectations and came out pleasantly surprised. Though it stumbles in places with wordings and contradictions those are pretty easily overlooked leaving an even flow to the rest of the story. The writing is kinda dull and we have but the barest shadows of a plot, but if you want a laid back chill power up story you'll probably enjoy this.

GeorgBRoyal Road

★★★ 2.5

read till chapter 33
the problem i find is the otaku-syled event, dialogue, plot.
the event and plot weakness is almost all otaku-syled stuff is used with little-to-none modification or too-much senseless modification making it have no originality or cannot be related.
the otaku-styled info-dump-dialogue that is straight out bad, it's like you copy paste it from somewhere, at least make some more dialogue to info giver to ake it seem alive or just make it a computer.

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