Worldbender- a LitRPG adventure
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This story will self destruct at exactly 2:10 pm 5/31/23
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- Status
- Hiatus
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- Rating
- 2.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 4
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- The Gloom, True DevourerRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Hi! I read your 'Children of a Colder Star' and ended up here. So, a few things I'd like to point out.
Perthaan comes off as a lazy guy in chapters one and two, but then at the end of two and through three he improves his intelligence and becomes more of a witty, likeable character. I just wanted to show that you're doing a good job of having a dynamic MC, but maybe slow it down a bit. This is interesting, and I want to know more about Naisists- will Perthan become one?
Also, where does the LitRPG aspect come in? I'm assuming later, but I really want to read that portion of it. Have a good day, Gordon!