World Ravaging Serpent

Self-Published

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Description

Tens of thousands of creatures have died in order to refine a single drop of a Noble Beast, a beast long since extinct harboring unimaginable power. A crazed scientist has made it his life's ambition to bring them back and unleash unimaginable horrors upon the world. A single snake with the blood of ancients flowing through his body must make his way through a treacherous world trying its best to kill him. Will he be stopped before he can mature, or will he persist through and take revenge on everything, that has once hurt him.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: NoNovelsNoLife

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 173
Views: 146,341

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Community Reviews(2)

DartmorinRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The novel is great overall. A bit unwieldy and clumsily written in the beginning, but smooth later on. The grammar similarily improves, but it isn't even all that bad at the start, just minor niggles.
The characters feel a bit bland and uninspired, but above average for a novel of this genre.
The world building is solid, but nothing extraordinary.
The story itself is great and deserves to be read.
the_random_userRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
As of chapter 61 or [barriers]
Short version...
This web novel is good; gramer is spell checked and sentance structure gets better with time.
Charcters and Interactions are enjoyable enough to read, while world building is solid.
All and all rather good.
Long version...
STYLE
The author seems to have a good thing going. Keep it up author...
Style: consistant. 9/10
Chapter length: good. 8/10
pacing: good. 7/10
Chapter release rate: almost daily. 10/10
STORY
The story itself is actually quite good. When I read the synopsis I figured it was going to be a power trip, wish fulfillment sorta deal, but I actually got a decent, if immature, main character who had to work for his abilitys.
World building: solid and consistant. 8/10
General story line: good 7.5/10
GRAMMER
rather good, especially from a novel that doesn't get enough attention. The auther definitely puts effort into getting better with his writing.
Word choice: good 8/10
Gramerical errors: good 8/10
Sentance structure: gets better with time. 5/10 for the first 15 chapters. 7/10 for the next 20. 8/10 for the rest
CHARACTER
Pritty good. All the important characters get a decent amount of write time, with past being revealed more and more as time goes on.
Character interaction: good. 8/10
Character believably: good. 7/10
Character motivations: good 7/10
One final thought about character: ITS NOT A GOD DAMNED REICARNATOR. Finally something original. 9000/10
FINAL THOUGHTS
All and all solid, definitely something to have a glance through at least.
Recommended.