World of Dungeons (Cancelled.)

Self-Published

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Description

The rewrite is here:

https://royalroadl.com/fiction/12679/insect-dungeon-vs-the-world

Synopsis:

Follow The Mc and his derail fairy helper from hell, as they solve the mysteries related to organizations trying to one shot them. while they also taking care of their dwindling resources and expensive monsters and greedy humans.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2016
Author
Underload

Tags

ACTIONADVENTURECOMEDYSUPERNATURAL

Royal Road Stats

Rating
2.5/ 5.0
Followers
194
Views
230,093

Chapters(60 total)

Reviews

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Community Reviews(9)

  • fanobodyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    It is a good fanfic don't just read the first chapter and rate 1 star.
    Style: He make a status window and a shop window, there is a good spacing.
    Story: Good story, make many twist to make an original story of the dungeon genre.
    Grammar: I am not a grammar nazi.
    Character: Yes there is a female that asume herself, yes she is not a mindless puppet that exist to make the mc feel beter about himself, no she is not part of a harem and have a predefined personality like "tsundere" and yes there is character progression.
    No, it is not the best story i have ever read but in royal road it is one of the best, i find it beter than slime dungeon, at least there is danger to the dungeon(the guild don't do everyting to protect the dungeon) and the dungeon exploit the system at the limit.
    Ps: There is two review that say that it need to be re-written but it has been a rewrite sinse then and there was no change in the review.
    PPS: Best 2 star rated fiction ever
  • undeadking23Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    wish this would continue i loved the story when i read it
  • bradyman50Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I am really tried to like this fiction, and will continue to read it, but by chapter 11, I was forcing myself to keep going.
    The story has a lot of potential, but the characters are ruining it. Minie is especially annoying, her partner Rocky is a newborn dungeon, and yet she expects him to know about the world already. She is upset when he succeeds and acts like he is insulting her when he asks her questions.
    He could die at any moment if an adventurer attacks, but it takes several days for her to even bring up ways he can defend himself, or even interact with the dungeon. In fact, she literally beat him for telling her about part of his status. When it comes time to pick a dungeon type, she gets mad at him for picking the one she didn't like even though she made no effort to bring up the fact that she had a problem with it, besides pointing out the exact same amount of flaws that she pointed out for every other option.
    At this point in the story, every single one of their issues would have either been easily solved or never existed if the characters communicated at all realistically. They seem surprised by normal seeming statements and some of the things they get angry over, I literally can't imagine someone actually being offended by. They both say (think) they want to act as partners, but neither of them acts like it in anyway, except for the fact that they say they are partners.
    The grammar is not too bad, but the rest of the fiction is dragged down by the characters.
    Starting in chapter 16, the character interactions and dialogue start feeling a lot more natural. I guess I just really don't like some of the characters. This has nothing to do with the level of writing, which continues to improve over tme, so I have adjusted my rating
  • Dr_DacRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    A fresh point of view to a more technical aspect of the whole dungeon story,
    this take on dungeons features a nice set of humor between the MCs. The
    story is a bit slow paced and the layout can be a hassle. But the story has potential
    and with a bit refining it may shine. Review done 19.06 currently 6 realeased chapters.
  • chayRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    It's a great idea insect dungeon etc
    Grammar is okay not formidable and not terrible
    The character are not develloped the fairy helper is an air head with anger issue and the dungeon an idiot
    The writting style is the main problem too much joking with an overdramatisation of the dialogue
    For a better story
    -less joke more plot
    -povs are good but choose one when in firs person don't use he him etc
    -stop being dramatic (introduction of the party)
    -be clear (a bit of suspense is good but trying to understand everything is really tiring)
  • eepavichRoyal Road
    ★ 1.0
    This story feels like it was written by someone who hates the Male Gender. All of the Men are emotionally unstable and require the guiding hand of whatever female companion they currently have, or else they are just useless. This is made worse by the constant berating and degrading comments the females make towards them in almost every paragraph they are a part of. Just no.
    The Style of this story is the becoming typical first person perspective that jumps from character to character. Each one starts with some sort of monologue or conversation and then moves out to give the reader a better idea of what is occurring with the story. I don't love or Hate it, and it is rather commonly used so if you like other dungeon stories of this type it will probably be a neutral for you too.
    The Story is a good idea, man is reincarnated without his memories as a dungeon core and now has to figure out everything in this new world with only pieces of information from his previous life. There is so much that can be done with this premise. The story starts out kind of slow and really takes the time to try to help the reader understand that this dungeon, while better than an average newly born dungeon... is still JUST a newly born dungeon. Not OP at all. The problem that I have with the story is the characters inside of it and their interactions.
    Grammar is not stellar but not terrible either. There is a lot of misplaced punctuation and a couple misspelled words. Humorously the word that is commonly replaced with "Fudge" is in their in all it's glory while "Hell" is replaced with "Shell". While there are some problems with the grammar a good editor would fix this easily, and if you enjoyed the story it is a small enough problem that your brain would make the corrections without taking you out of the story.
    Characters...
    Rocky - A very confused rock... dungeon core... thing? I liked him and if he wasn't such a pussy I probably could keep reading this story to see what happens to him.
    Mi
  • jazzo7Royal Road
    ★ 1.0
    You wait for the dungeon to actually form then you wait for the conversations between the two main characters to end then when it finally happens you hope to see the dungeon kill some adventureres right?! No you get a 3rd person pov of more talking more irritating conversations that actually have a person who only says three letters like its the fucking binary (or trinary system in this case i guess). Then after all that after you finally have something going on now you wait for the author to edit. Personally I am done waiting. By the time I finally get to the good parts of this story if there even are any either the apocalypse is gonna happen skynets gonna be created or the apes are gonna take over the world. Any which way it's not worth waiting. All in all I'm more angry at myself for waisting my time.
  • Charles83Royal Road
    ★ 0.5
    This series is only for some people, yeah the series is slow, but the worst part is the companion of the main character, it is an absolute hateful character, and she have 0 character grow, also the MC is a rug, he has no will nor choice nor anything, the general story is good but sadly the author gets sidetracked too easily that cause a lot of the slow progression and sometimes just the plain stop of everything, (around 18 chapters for barely half a minute of action).
    Well I'm abandoning this story, the characters just damage the story too much for my taste.
  • angryfanRoyal Road
    ★ 0.5
    You realize how bad this story is when you look at the character Minnie is useless. She can't even do her job right instead she slows everything down  then you figure out she is supposed to be the ditsy sidekick like Jar Jar Binks except the writer doesn't realize that most people hate Jar Jar Binks. A good writer can about a piece of grass and it will be one of the most engrossing stories you have ever read. In turn a bad writer can turn a good idea into an unreadable piece of shit. A good dungeon story is Gaia awakens which is about ants and spiders fighting mice and rabbits and 10 times better than this story.