World Merge - LitRPG for the broken

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Description

What happens when Gods play games? Everyone involved is going to lose. One of those losers happens to be Cyrus, dragged from his life on earth into a fight that he wants no part of.

Filled with hatred and hell bent on revenge, Cyrus would do anything to get back home to those he cares about. Even kill.

Problem is, he's weak.

A brooding earthling. A gentle Beastwoman. A sadistic Elven assassin. A giant teddy bear of a Demon. And a kidnapped Dwarf.

This band of misfits doesn't have what it takes, but they sure as hell are going to try anyways. Besides, what's the worst that can happen?

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Please take the time to Comment/Review. I intend to constantly edit the chapters I release and improve upon my writing abilities as the story comes out. I have big plans!

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: PhantomKnightXM

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Rating: 3.6/ 5.0
Followers: 26
Views: 13,468

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SlighterRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Overall: To just state it out, I think the story is really worth a shot. The writer starts to build a deep and action filled plot after the world is introduced and the characters are evolving and have their own unique quirks. They aren't cardboard cut outs. There is much to be found out as the story goes on.
Style: The style is fairly normal when it comes to writing. There aren't really any unique style markers that make the writing stand out differently, but there's nothing necassarily wrong with it either.
Grammer: The grammer was fairly good for me, there could be more descriptive words used but otherwise I had no problems.
Story: The first few chapters start out a little slow in order to introduce us to a new world and there is some world building involved in that process. After the first 8 or 9 chapters in really starts to delve into a much deeper plot and I became far more interested as the story went on.
Character: Actual 3D characters that are fleshed out and have emotions? Check. The Main character isn't overpowered and is flawed, faces challenges and so far doesn't have a ridiculous power up rate. He stands out like a main character would and faces obstacles but there are reasonable ways to overcome them.