World End My Life Start WEMLS

Self-Published

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Description

world end my life start or WEMLS It's the story of two friends that where studying when the world changed. What well happend to them? Will they survive? Stay as friends?

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
Chieroco

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Rating
1.3/ 5.0
Followers
8
Views
26,628

Chapters(23 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • SedactiveRoyal Road
    1.0
    You could ask the question if a story has bad grammar or spelling then the contents as in the story itself could be good right?
    Now if its just on the level of some misspelled words or some rather not so obvious grammar mistakes, you could be right.
    The problem lies in the fact that even if the author is aware he decides to post it regardless but its so bad that the right choice would be to improve it and then post it.
    Instead he/she decides to post it ignoring all this, this in itself already shows how serious this person is about his novel.
  • gnarlytreemanRoyal Road
    1.0
    The paragraphs and sentances are too short.  There are a lot of misspelled or wrong words.  The writing does not have enough flow to be understandable and easy to read.  The chapters are also very short.  If properly written in paragraph format, all 15 chapters could fit into the first chapter as a one shot.