Description

My submission for the January Writing Contest

POWER of the SUN is aCells at Work-inspired comedy short story about a hydrogen atom that goes on an adventure trying to stop the sun from going out.

This story contains some mild profanity and dumb hijinks, Not everything is serious throughout this story and some things will not be explained because I do not care. Enjoy the story!

What readers say about With the Power of the SUN!

“I liked the author's take on the prompt 'And then the sun went out.' Overall pacing could use some work but the characters are fun enough. There were points where I had to question what I was reading but that was more due to in-lore stuff rather than overal…”

BullerRoyal Road5.0 / 5

“This is a cute, funny and well written story. I love the attention to detail the author put to some aspects of it (like the names of the characters). I couldn’t be bothered to check, but I’m sure I could find the exact star the story starts of on, since the…”

Evelyn AdelbergRoyal Road5.0 / 5

Community Reviews(2)

BullerRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

I liked the author's take on the prompt 'And then the sun went out.' Overall pacing could use some work but the characters are fun enough. There were points where I had to question what I was reading but that was more due to in-lore stuff rather than overall style. I would call it a good read for the casual reader of kinda-sci-fi

Evelyn AdelbergRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

This is a cute, funny and well written story. I love the attention to detail the author put to some aspects of it (like the names of the characters).
I couldn’t be bothered to check, but I’m sure I could find the exact star the story starts of on, since the author gave its mass and the number of planets orbiting it ^^