Witch's Sight
Self-Published
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Description
Since the creation of the Sea of Tears the acolytes have sacrificed witches to the kraken.
When Alyn's daughter starts singing to flowers she begins to worry about her. When the flowers start to listen to the young girls songs Alyn becomes terrified. How do you rescue your daughter from a fate worse than death?
The Witch's Trilogy spans an island nation. With magic, swords, subterfuge, and underhanded dealings they must find a way for witches and humans to work together.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- Crissy Moss
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 360
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5This was a very interesting short story/prologue. It is unfortunate that the first paragraph had a mistake "Just the way they screamed them out told her so." which gave me pause to wonder about the quality of the piece, but that was one of the few standout issues that can be easily fixed. The number of awkward comma splices being another. The story has a good premise, but without knowing more about the setting it does seem that by its very nature Acolytes almost seem to be unbelievably ignorant. Aside from some issues of how things work and the presentation and flow of the story was quite enjoyable. The conclusion sets the stage and this is perhaps why it feels a bit weak - it is a prelude to a trilogy. Though it still can stand well on its own.