Witch of the Lunar Order (A New Adult Urban Fantasy)

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Witch of the Lunar Orderis a New Adult Urban Fantasy with a witch female lead set in an alternative modern world. Full of friendship, adventure, found family and discovering ones true self.

Exile or forfeit my magic. Not the choices I expected after graduating university.

An unstable magic surges through my veins, and it’s growing harder to suppress. Desperate to save my powers, and my dream of running an alchemy shop, I escaped to the big city to hunt for a cure and hide from the witches.

After stealing an ancient codex—blame the magical fox—I discover a potion recipe that offers a chance to learn control. The allure of mastering my magic is tempting. A little sip won’t hurt, right? But when I rush to aid my wounded friend, dark creatures ambush us. I unleash my magic, saving our lives and almost destroying the street.

Barista in the morning and alchemist by night. I’m just trying to make ends meet. But a hidden danger stalks the shadows and I fear it hungers for my new magic. Hunted by demonspawn, nephilim and dark magic, I must decide what I will sacrifice to hold on to my dreams. Will embracing this new power save my future or destroy it?

If you like fast-paced Urban Fantasy with a strong heroine, heart pounding action, found family and a dash of humor, then you’ll love Witch of the Lunar Order.

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Ongoing

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4.5/ 5.0
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25

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Community Reviews(2)

  • drewtamRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Well written, engaging descriptions. The author is good at moving the story along while not over explaining with awkward exposition, nor under explaining with disorienting scenes.
    A insecure witch from a race of witches moves to the big city of numerous races to find her own path and fresh start. New friends are made and meaning is being built.
    Pacing is good, no boring sections so far. Dialogue is effective, though occasionally too much is glossed, or real connection is hard to convey.
    Good story, looking forward to see how it develops.
  • Strictly WorseRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    The story isn't yet finished as I post this but given there is only one other reveiw I thought it worth adding my thoughts.
    The story is fairly easy reading, while there are action elements the MC is primarily an alchemist. While the story isn't particularly crafting focused I'd say as a fan of slice of life crafting stories that it has a somewhat similar vibe so is worth a try if that's your thing. For what it's worth the crafting we do see feels very distinctly witchy rather than generic which is a nice change of pace.
    The story seems to be pretty good in terms of spelling and grammar.
    The plot seems overall pretty solid so far, with plenty of foreshadowing though it does feel like it would benefit from a little more polishing. Obviously this comes with the big caveat that I haven't read the ending yet.
    Conclusion: It's pretty good and if you're looking for a fairly chill fantasy story it's well worth a look. I don't think it's particularly exceptional but I wouldn't be shocked if as the story grows it gets there. Definitely a story I plan on keeping an eye on.