Winter

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

A short scene between two lovers at the start of winter.

Faith is excited to share the first snowfall with her girlfriend.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
C_Ell

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICFEMALE LEADSLICE OF LIFEROMANCE SUBPLOTSTRONG LEADGAMELITSHORT STORYCONTEMPORARYATTRACTIVE LEAD

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.9/ 5.0
Followers
13
Views
1,190

Chapters(4 total)

Reviews

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Community Reviews(4)

  • AshlawrenceRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Hi! Thought I'd leave a review even early on to just show feedback. First of all it has promise, and I can def see myself continuing to read it, the story and the girl and wolf? Seem interesting. I didn't see any glaring mistakes or something that made me not want to continue reading!
    If anything at all to put spotlight under it might be the way the wolf mother speaks as in after
    saving the child it what follows is "How curious.." The character thinks to themselves, I think if overused that might be annoying but might just be personal preference. Just something to keep in mind perhaps.
    I also don't want to stress anything more since it's still first chapter as of this review, I will update it later if something does occur~ I'd say later I will probably do an advanced review to better reflect it but as now its still too early.
    Thanks for the story!
  • MK bk-201Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Cute, short and sweet little story about a couple of girls in a morning with the first snow of the year, one excited for it and one who only wants to keep sleeping
    PD: it should be marked as completed, as they dont seem be any more chapters planned other than this one.
  • pewpewcachooRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This is a cute and sweet story that I really like. I came here because your other short story was awesome and this one didn't disapoint at all. The writing is great, your grammar is good and the story is awesome. I hope you come back and write some more short stories.
  • IndigoDawnRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    I can't tell if this is a sweet short story or a lead into something longer.
    Either way I recomend reading this.