A posthuman, dying as the shockwave of a supernova reaches his starship, awakens to find himself in the body of a little girl on ancient Earth — a girl who was just murdered by marauding invaders from another tribe.

Written by MrSimpleEdited by Trismegistus Shandy

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Mrlonely001Royal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

love the concept of the story of someone acting with the goal of not wanting to die, the idea is what i want in a character. There are little to no books i have found with the idea, furthermore the writing quality is good and the character has a reasonable personality thus far

NagisaRoyal Road

★★★★ 3.5

Really fast paced and lacking in character development. The story and his journey are really intriguing but it lacks substance since there are rarely any emotions displayed. It reads more like a record of events that happened to jon rather john's story. This could work if it was told by a cold companion AI journaling his adventure . But as a first person or third person pov it really feels like its missing something. The author said that they planned to rewrite to fix such things as the pacing and adding thoughts of john. If they do this might upgrade the story . Anyway i wish the Author well as the idea of this story is pretty cool and seeing them take feed back positively is really great of them. I hope that the comments ive left helped even a bit and leave this review here to say what i think of the story so far.

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