Where Do We Go
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Description
A leap from an ancient bridge should have marked the end of Zara’s story. Instead, she wakes in a strange house, her body bearing mysterious wounds and her memories supposedly fractured.
Rescued by an enigmatic stranger with sharp words and guarded eyes, Zara soon discovers she’s not alone. The house holds others like him—each shrouded in their own secrets.
As Zara navigates an unfamiliar world where myths and reality blur, will she be forced to confront her own past and the haunting truth behind her survival? And what price must be paid to find out?
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Author
- talahameer
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- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(1)
- NafamericRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0So for reading between the first chapter to the third chapter I'll give my honest thoughts about this story. Knowing full well that I'm not a huge member of this site, but every bit helps.
1: Style Score
I like how the story is told mostly through feelings and words. Internal dialog. Its as if your living through the character and not just reading about what was happening and what had happened.
2: Grammar
Well I suck at grammar and I'm not going to criticize someone else's use of commas or whatever this thing is ; .
3: Story Score
So far I'm hooked. Its one of the reasons I go to the threads instead of looking up who is the top 10 or whatnot. The story flows seeming from second to second, and that is how I really enjoy reading. Like your not missing any movement or thought.
4: Character Score
Ok... so here is the thing. I really like how you have already given the characters depth and their own personalities that don't seem to copy the other. A clear defined line between the two. Even their speech is different and is something that I struggle with from time to time.
5: Overall Score
I like it so far and can't wait to see more and more. Not only that though, but to see your artistry of words evolve over time.
Thank you, ^_^