Where did I wake up?
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Description
A pretty standard story about a man that gets transferred to a new world, and gains a system to help him survive.
This is pretty close to the first draft of this story, so there will be grammar mistakes until I get down to fixing them. Synopsis, genre and tags will also change as I get more writing done.
I will try to release two to three short chapters a week.
I don't own the cover image; it is just something I found online.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- Keith
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 182
- Views
- 21,445
Chapters(12 total)
Reviews
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Community Reviews(2)
- bloo233Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0Only 11 chapters out so far, but it was a really great start. It's kind of generic, but if you like the genre I'm sure you'll be immediately into this. I didn't find the MCs reactions from getting transported to be unbelivable, in fact I like his personality so far. From what we've seen it seems like he's not one of those types that ends up somewhere else, and immediately loses all his modern person values.
If there's any negative, it's that I don't much like the system here. So far it's not bad, but I see the potential for crazy bloat when EVERYTHING is a skill that goes from lvl 0-100. I'm worried it'll start taking pages in the future and I'll have to keep multiple tabs open to keep track of it. Another sort of negative is the lack of side characters. I say sort of because this is most likely due to there only being 11 chapters. I hope it changes in the future, a lot of these types of stories fall into the trap of actually treating it like a game, with no human interaction. Which are usually nice to read at the start, but get it gets stale fast when all the MC does is grind out levels for this skill and that skill. MC is godlike but never uses his power, spends his time as an E rank adventurer collecting plants and 'hiding' his power. Yuck. But, in the end that's just a future worry. I'm sure the author has plans to keep the story interesting.
I also appreciate that the story is completely readable. No 5th grade writing here folks.
Give it a read! - FallionRoyal Road★★★ 3.0If you’re okay with stupid MCs then you’ll probably find this great.
The grammar is good, the story seems interesting and I like the style.
Sadly I quite literally can’t make myself read a story where I feel like the only reason the MC survives the first day is due to plot armor.
Spoiler: Spoiler
Placing stats inot charisma while naked in a forest with possibly no other sentient creatures in the world is quite possibly the definition of stupid.
worst case he could have simply not placed the points and kept them saved untill he confirmed the location of other people.
Next he goes and uses, of all things, fire magic to HUNT IN THE MIDDLE OF A FOREST... The temperatures needed to kill something quickly would completely ruin the pelt, possibly most of the meat and would almost certainly set everything on fire.
If you didn’t know, forest fires are pretty deadly....
Basically my conclusion is that the only thing keeping this guy alive is, and will be, plot armor...