When the Lilyflower blooms...

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In a modern world where magic and status boards exist, twenty-three-year-old S-Class Archmagus Aria Saciustrum found herself in the morbid situation of joining her country’s own Dungeon Dive expedition. A researcher at heart, Aria didn’t like the idea of slogging away in the dirty depths of the petrifying dungeons that spawned all over the world.

However, her scientific mind trumped her own feelings, and she forced herself to join her country’s first S-Class Dungeon Dive. The allure of finding a treasure or a discovery that could shake the foundations of human society was too enticing to just walk away.

So… Aria dived deep into the Dungeon, alongside her friend the S-Class Healer Yvette, and yes, her efforts had paid off. The S-Class party did manage to find a groundbreaking discovery. One that would shake the foundations of the world and would haunt the nightmares of everyone living on Planet Earth.

Just… It wasn’t what Aria had hoped for...

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: Linodo

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 105
Views: 58,404

Chapters(55 total)

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ThinkTwiceRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Written as of the end of book 1.
I would recommend giving it a read.
Overall thoughts 4.5/5: A really good read. Definitely a wonderful mix of dungeon crawl, good characters, and suspense.
Style score 4.5/5: Tl;DR: Very consistent tone, pacing is a bit unstable at times.
Tone: Perhaps the best aspect of your entire story. I absolutely loved the consistent tone of suspense and tension present from the prologue and spread evenly throughout the entire first book. An emotional tension of this kind is something that is beyond the written words that can only be given to readers in excellent stories. There was always something big going to happen, and I was aware of that the entire time I read.
Pacing: This is where the style of your story faltered a tiny bit. Pacing is in itself two things for me; The speed at which events develop and the steadiness of those developments. The events themselves progressed fairly consistently throughout the story, however, towards the end this changed radically. The pacing was suddenly thrown dramatically out of the window in certain parts as the last couple of chapters took place and it was fairly jarring to suddenly be jumping from event to event when the previous chapters all had such consistent pacing.
Logic: The logic in the story's style was very consistent and well done. This doesn't mean all the characters acted rationally, but I could see why they did things and never did the logic of your story cause me to pause and be thrown out of it.
Visual Image: You paint wonderful visual images with your words. There was never a moment when I could not imagine what I was seeing. The style of your writing is extremely vivid and thought out, and I really enjoyed going through this world of yours.
Story Score: Tl;Dr: Very good with slight inconsistencies.
The plot: The plot of this novel was very good. I say this with most of it not having been revealed yet. However, with the parts that have been revealed everything seemed to ooze mystery and I
arztgastRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
The story starts with 20 something chapters of dungeon conquering which is way too long. I had to stop shortly after that because the 2 lead characters are just plain annoying.