When Old Friends Meet
Self-Published
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Description
Two old friends meet on opposing sides of a great battle.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- Machine.Fantasies
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 163
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5This piece has a simple premise - two old friends, who called each other brother - decide to settle the situation with a fight to the death in the midst of their great battle. It makes no logical sense for things to be done in such a way, or for them to even be on the front lines at all, or for how any of this is allowed to play out in the midst of the conflict. The story itself is hampered by its awareness of the situation, and how it goes towards a conclusion that is frankly illogical given the climax. An interesting piece, but I think the narrative stumbles a fair amount.