When Mind and Matter Collide

Hello there. First ever post here.

Humanity has taken its first steps into the stars. Other races have esablished a neutral ground to conduct diplomatic and cultural exchange. Each race that participates is given an enclave and is expexted to provide security personal who answer to the station commander. Thing have been going well until a serial killer begin to hunt on the station.

Let me know if there is grammatical errors or weird sentences. Enjoy!