What happens when you betray the loser
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Description
What happens when 31 students from a school get summoned to a different world with the cliche, kill the demon Lord, but what happens when the loser of the class gets betrayed and left to rot by his so called classmates, and would he give up his humanity for his revenge.
What would he do after his revenge? Live a nice peacful life? NO! He will fuck the gods up for messing with him.
I do not own the cover picture. If you want credit for the picture message me.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Crazyace02
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 66
- Views
- 3,214
Chapters(4 total)
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Community Reviews(5)
- PolarbearRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Only one chapter at the moment but i think it's amazing already.
- TheAlpha2000Royal Road★★★★ 4.0i saw some negative reviews on this and i was hesitant to read it but i decided to read it anyway
and i did see some grammar mistakes but it is actually a pretty good story
so good job so far and dont let those negative reviews get to your head
and for the readers who see this review i advice you to read atleast the first 2 chapter before you decide this story is not worth your time - fanobodyRoyal Road★★ 2.0Style: short text, text align center, color red, the bold and the change in the style from chapter to chapter don't make me want to read. Check popular story for how they put their text.
Story: Arifureta style of story, but the mc gain power to easy and no deep.
Grammar: Not first language so i put a 5.
Character: Lack deep, he not working, he is stupid, induce the other to fight him when he is weaker. Could use an explaination to why he is a loser and give him quality other than being op. - world1324Royal Road★ 1.0Style: annoying .. nothing else. The text in the center during the first few chapters is really hard on the eyes and confusing/annoying to read. The red status plate just doesnt make it any better, maybe look at popular reincarnation/summoning storys on how to do it right. Also make the dialogues better, i mean really let them talk and not just "he does this so he does that and then he says this", almost no dialogue at all.
Story: He gets betrayed gets op out of nowhere and i couldnt read longer than 6 chapter. Typical "gets op way too fast and does whatever he wants" story without any depth.
Grammar: The grammar, or to be precise the wording is just a nightmare. Get a prove reader and someone who tells you when the phrases dont make any sense.
Character: Stupid, naive, arrogant and the side characters make no sense or are just really two dimensional. - arckaneRoyal Road★ 0.5Grammar structure plot dialouge is all bad dont even bother reading by the 3rd chapter hes practically a god in stats out of nowhere