Welcome to the Dungeon

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2019

Author

Justin K

• Chapter 45
  Jun 29, 2020
• Chapter 44
  May 18, 2020
• Chapter 43
  May 12, 2020
• Chapter 42
  Apr 27, 2020
• Chapter 41
  Apr 13, 2020
• Chapter 40
  Mar 30, 2020
• Chapter 39
  Feb 17, 2020
• Chapter 38
  Jan 7, 2020
• Chapter 7
  May 29, 2019
• Chapter 6
  May 28, 2019
• Chapter 5
  May 27, 2019
• Chapter 4
  May 24, 2019
• Chapter 3
  May 18, 2019
• Chapter 2
  May 14, 2019
• Chapter 1
  May 12, 2019

Reviews

Community Reviews(4)

• BlueOnceMoonRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  D&D meets real-world is a fun idea. In some places I was reminded a bit of Goblin Slayer. This story feels like it's full of things the author loves, and that's always really nice to see. It's also really cool to see a longer-term project still recieve updates. I hope to see this one keep going.
• WilberforceRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Story : the idea is good. A high schooler trapped in a dungeon within his mind (or should I say dream?). It makes you want to know more.
  Style : this is the weakest link imo. Too much telling and not showing. Show don't tell, as they say.
  Take this paragraph for example:
  "After my father went back inside, I decided to mow the lawn. The rest of the day was uneventful. I drove my sister to her friend's house and did some chores my mother forced me to do. I also went to open gym and practiced my martial arts for an hour."
  Instead of telling, you could instead show us how he practiced martial arts for one good hour. It will be far more interesting than reading the paragraph above.
  Different fonts make it difficult to read. Consider making it uniform.
  Grammar : okay but needs editing. Consider using Grammarly and Prowritingaid.
  Character: I haven't read enough to judge the mc but he seems to ignore his surroundings. There were questions he should have asked from the very beginning. Well, this could change in the subsequent chapters.
• BadGenuisRoyal Road

  ★★ 1.5

  The concept is good.
  But concept is concept. Writing skill is another.
  Not grammatical errors or wrong use of vocabulary.
  You simply can't read it.
• blindfoxRoyal Road

  ★ 0.5

  This has alot of points where it seems that it can be good but just falls short he powers way to fast even for op char its insanly fast he meets a fairy marrys her without knowing cool stuff instantly they start saying i love you no sence just confusing amount of skills needs boxs for skills honstly he just uses smaller text kinda hurts my eyes i was hoping for it to get better read to 20 before i couldnt anymore