We Don't Start Fights: Theseus Protocol
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He just wanted to see the stars — not end a war.
When a routine diplomatic mission turns sour, the Theseus is forced to play peacemaker in a genocidal conflict. Nathan Sawyer is one of the only humans on board, reluctantly taking command when the captain defects.
Nathan and his team of uplifted misfits must work together to solve a humanitarian crisis on a scale nobody has ever faced. If they succeed, then a lasting peace may spread across the galaxy. Should they fail, then the planet Horthus will be destroyed.
In charge and out of his depth, Nathan must quickly learn to navigate a labyrinth of intrigue and red tape — and if that wasn't bad enough?
One side iseatingthe other.
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- Status
- Ongoing
- Year
- 2024
- Author
- A. Stargazer
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- Rating
- 4.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 89
- Views
- 8,535
Chapters(5 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- Apollo149Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0A Promising Premise
"The Starship Theseus" presents a compelling premise that taps into the enduring allure of interstellar exploration and galactic conflict. The juxtaposition of advanced human technology with the primitive yet resilient Aurealians creates a rich tapestry of potential storytelling. The concept of instant interstellar travel opens up a universe of possibilities, both for breathtaking adventure and deep philosophical inquiry.
Character Potential
Stargazer: As an Aurealian survivor with a tragic backstory, Stargazer has the potential to be a compelling protagonist. Her journey from hunted prey to a beacon of hope could be emotionally resonant.
Horthus: A ruthless leader with a thirst for power, Horthus could serve as a formidable antagonist. His interactions with the human visitors could lead to intense and morally ambiguous conflicts.
Worldbuilding Opportunities
The universe of "The Starship Theseus" offers a wide canvas for worldbuilding. The diverse cultures, societies, and political landscapes of the various colonies could be explored in depth. The Aurora Drive, as a revolutionary technology, could have far-reaching implications for both society and individual lives.
Grammar and Writing Style
Additionally, the story's grammar and structure are solid and well-developed, providing a strong foundation for the narrative to unfold.
As I read these first few chapters I kept asking myself questions as I was being drawn into the story. How will Stargazer and Horthus evolve as the story continues? What are their motivations, fears, and dreams? How will the crew of the Starship Theseus navigate the ethical complexities of humanity? What are the underlying power dynamics? How will the arrival of humans play out? I was drawn in and wanted to learn more.
Overall, I think that "The Starship Theseus" can become a truly epic tale that captivates readers and leaves a lasting impression. - AtavisticTexasRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0This is an honest review swap, so no favouritism etc. Just a a heads-up for anyone reading this.
The style of Starship Theseus is easy to read and follow for the most part, with some minor bits of confusion that I skipped over. It didn't really detract from my enjoyment of the story or anything, but it did make me feel like I didn't have the full picture I was intended to have. It feels light-hearted and less technical than the sci-fi I'm used to, but I am only at Chapter four, so take keep that in mind. So far, the writing style and the flow of prose and descriptions have all been incredibly well-written and a joy to read.
The story itself is a really interesting premise and setup. There's instantaneous teleportation, A.I., uplifted non-sentient species, copious amounts of antimatter and one species hunting and enslaving another. All of it is sprinkled throughout a fascinating plot surrounding a hunter-gatherer society that has regressed from their spacefaring origins because of a monarchical society that hunts their kind for food. It certainly isn't super strict realism, but neither is it low-quality drivel. It's somewhere in between and I really like that.
The grammar is almost entirely without issue. A few capitalisation errors and places where I would put hyphens, but that might be down to stylistic choices or missing things in editing. There's almost nothing grammar-wise that I noticed to be an issue and I went into this review trying to find things to complain about, haha.
The characters I've seen so far I really enjoy, especially Nathan, Simon and "the old man", they're all very well-written and I get an immediate sense of their personalities and beliefs. The dialogue especially is really satisfying and humorous. I can tell that the characters were crafted with a lot of care and attention to detail, much like the rest of it.
Other than some confusion over unclear exposition and descriptions, the only other real complaint I have is that the opening didn't rea