Watching Grass Grow

Self-Published

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Description

So my story is pretty cliche killed by the gods, reincarnated into a different world I even get a status screen. Yeah this story is probably not gonna stand out very well so whats different well I'm a plant, still not enough my status screen looks more like a base builder in strategy games, need more how about my growth rate is so fast I can grow 100 meters faster than an Olympic Athlete can run it. Now your interested click to read about how I Joseph Phisher a sentient plant shows the world who's really top of the food chain.Author: This will be my first fiction so I hope you cut me some slack that said I'm open to constructive criticism. Because of circumstance the release times might be far apart but i plan on finishing this thing even if support is nonexistent. My inspiration came from Re: Monster, Verdant Lord, Plants vs Zombies and Little Shop of Horrors. Warning: Mature rating is mainly for violence and foul language but others things might also come later.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2015
Author
Tubbymora

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYCOMEDYSUPERNATURALMULTIPLE LOVERS

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.4/ 5.0
Followers
1,204
Views
357,045

Chapters(22 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • ShingamiRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Nuff said. But I need at least fifty characters.
  • HerrMaickelRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Interesting concept, keep up the good work!
  • gnarlytreemanRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    the story concept is new. you should write more of this story
  • dwoolfyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The more that I read this story the more I enjoy it.  The one real detraction in this story is how it is often not clear what is being done by who and why.  Of note, the one time I mentioned it I quickly got a response from the author explaining the event.
    I did also only give 4 stars for grammar.  This is not because of bad spelling or usage, but it is because of the author putting in the wrong word/tense/usage/spelling/ect... quite infrequently.  This means that the author is doing a really good job with making the story readable with good language skills, but makes a few mistakes here and there, that could easily be dealt with by a bit of additional proofreading.
    In reality my only real complaint with the story is how slow the releases are in comparison to some of the other major fictions on the site.  This is not a goad to make the author write faster at the expense of the quality of the work, but just a side comment.
  • sigmarcRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Unique and fun hehe...thanks  for writing this story
    if only had blue boxes . WHY? cause i am a BLUE BOX FAN and it would look cooler
    And PLEASE UPDATE FASTER
    I WANT MORE :PPPPP
  • BambiDyretRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Wanna see more of this :P btw is the grass gonna grow soon ? you haven't used any looking at grass growing jokes yet ?
  • Ellio98Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Great and unique story so far, i hope the authour does not drop this and continues to make chapters.
  • RabenFutterRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    So far all of the characters have been predictable and maybe a bit boring but that dident stop me from enjoying the novel.
    The reason that i like the novel is for the unique powers and the fast pace i want to know how the mc is going to influence the world and so far it was not disepointing in that aspect.
  • Noir LightRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    In my opinion, I think the story is amusing to read, kinka funny at times ya know. It's a really fun story to read, there isn't a whole lot bad to say about it. I hope the story continues to be updated so that other readers and myself have the chance to read it.
  • SeraphuRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    So, for the second time, while scrolling through the top active list, i find myself stopping before a certain entry. It is named "watching grass grow", and the concept actually sounds quite interesting. I seem to faintly recall stumbling upon this particular title before, and wonder what made me reconsider reading it. So i open up chapter 1, read the first two sentences, and am immediately reminded why...
    The grammar is absolutely horrendous! there is no other way to put it. Punctuation is clearly not employed nearly enough, and sentences stretch over several rows. If you were to get an editor, or even just take 10 minutes to learn how to apply punctuation, i'm sure your story would improve immensly.
    Note that this review only covers the first chapter, as i couldn't stomach more butchering of the english language.