Warrior of Fang

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In the darkest times when the world was in ruin, a chosen one gifted with the light to vanquish the darkness is born. A never ending battle with the eternal dragon is fought throughout time, through generation after generation, guided by the talismans of old, an ancient awakening and a forgotten goddess.

Alex Fang, a young Feles warrior, the new generation against the darkness has yet to discover his true family linage against the darkness, but it has already set its plans into motion to stop the light from winning

His struggles shortly started after he receives his talisman passed down through his family at his sixth birthday, coming in contact with Dumah who carries a dark essence which corrupts those week to its influence.

This dark influence slowly changes the kind-hearted king, creating conflict within the lands of Panthera, the darkness seeping into the land.

Alex works hard to grow in rank to protect the one who he would give everything to protect from this darkness - princess Tigra.

When his true awakening happens, he discovers the world seeped in a deeper darkness than he could have ever imagined, but will he succeed in vanquishing the darkness from his home.

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Status: Ongoing
Year: 2021
Author: Megagirl

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Rating: 3.2/ 5.0
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CitronscotchRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
I really wanted to like this book when I tried it. The author is a model of determination, and that is praiseworthy. Still writing and updating her story after five years without a single review? Or comment, there may be some, but I saw none for the chapters I read at least. That's hell of impressive! A Megagirl indeed!
That being said... I am going to stop there, at chapter 60something, I'm afraid. The story is not that bad, actually. Nothing unheard of, the common trope of the child from the prophecy arising to save the world and swoop the gorgeous and brave princess. But there is a reason the tropes are popular, they work just fine. No, the problem is... the writing is just too... immature.
Firstly, the grammar needs work. A significant amount of typos, especially for homonyms ("tare" instead of "tear", "passed" for "past", etc.), repeatedly, and a severe punctuation problem. Missing comas everywhere. Both symptoms make me suspect the author uses one of these apps that write down what you speak aloud, instead of actually writing stuff herself. Which is fine when used as a tool you check and edit afterwards, but cannot replace writing entirely.
But the writing itself needs maturing too. Short sentences, simple words, stiff lines...
The story, although still relatively childish, especially in the early chapters, actually gets a lot better after Alex joins the Academy. The hardships he experiences then really help give the story a more grown-up vibe. I can't say the cat people help in that regard, but well, maybe that's just me. I never understood the appeal of beastkin, and even less the lore surrounding it, but I also can't argue that they are any more or less realistic than elves, dwarves or goblins, and I have no problem with those, sooo... let's just say it's merely personal preferences. I can maybe guess the goal was to oppose the good animals with the dark humans, much further in, which... I can hardly find fault in. Anyways... ^^
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