War Orphan
Self-Published
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Description
As the war ended between the Alexas and the Ylios empires, poverty reigned inside both their lands, and once prideful nobels now scrourge the street desperately killing for bread alongside the peasants they once ruled. Darkness fills the hearts of the worn out soldiers, as well as the dirt poor peasants, seeing no hope to their children's survival. Follow the most unfortunate of the lot. The war orphans. Those who have lost everything but still manage to, somehow, survive...I would really appreciate feedback as this is my first fiction, and thanks.(I do not own the picture)
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- RebelKami
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 10
- Views
- 11,044
Chapters(10 total)
- Chapter 10: VillageDec 27, 2015
- Chapter 9: BeginningsDec 26, 2015
- Chapter 8: UnexpectedDec 26, 2015
- Chapter 7: FinallyNov 21, 2015
- Chapter 6: LegacyNov 17, 2015
- Chapter 5: friendlessNov 15, 2015
- Chapter 4: SurvivalNov 14, 2015
- Chapter 3: Twisted worldNov 13, 2015
- Chapter 2: ThiefNov 13, 2015
- Chapter 1: Another day, Another roadNov 12, 2015
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Community Reviews(2)
- VinoRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5As i see it, it's still early for a review but well, why not!
Your story is easy to read if not for the font, but it's my opinion.
Otherwise it's seems like you plan to update your story at a fast pace, but i think it would be better to make your chapters longer even if it takes more time to update.
Carry on :) - kaelrabeloRoyal Road★★★ 3.0the chapters are way too short, either make then bigger or upload more frequently, i fell the story is interesting as it is but vague, because of the short lenght of the chapters