War of Djinn and Men Part 1.

Self-Published

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Description

This all started 12ish years ago. I had the most vivid dreams, night terrors and sleep paralysis... I have never been able to just let them go. The dreams always continued the very next night or next time I slept So in talking to one of my Army friends, I told him I wanted to try writing this more like a story. He told me come here, and supports the thought and that's all I need. This is my first writing attempt and I still have issues with my concussion so it might get a little chopped up at times. Id love feedback! but be clear with what's wrong please and be warned, The story gets dark and gnarly. I'm not proud of that, But it will make sense when you're trying to help illustrate and portray evil. This story is written through the main characters eyes, to include his own narration.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2023

Royal Road Stats

Rating
5.0/ 5.0
Followers
3
Views
4,158

Chapters(23 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • blackfalcon1210Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Good premise, and interesting magical mechanics. Multi world system it looks like so far, with elements from our mythology, demons, dijnn, leprechauns.
    Ch 1 review - Story really needs a editor to run through it. Parts of it read like a 5-line. Terse and to the point, stories should flow a bit more. Punctuation and timing would help this story smooth out.
    ch 3 Edit- Story flows much better as the chapters go on. Good descriptions and details.