War butterfly

Self-Published

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Description

This is a story that happens in the Roman times, it starts in 40bc Gaul and a 17 year old Elf boy named Ary is on his last school week,  it's a monday just like any other except for the fact roman soldiers are roaming the area and that the elf kingdom of Cinua is about  to dwellve into a civil war

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2023
Author
DaveTheSea

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYMAGICMALE LEADNON-HUMAN LEADLOW FANTASYWAR AND MILITARY

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
1
Views
913

Chapters(3 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • DianamarRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    I Hope the story telling goes smoothly and I am Waiting for the character developments. I Would like to know more about the characters families and their dynamics, as well how the school theme will interfere with the rest of the story.
    Maybe you should ask someone to spell and grammar read proof for you, it can be overwhelming writing and you may overlook some mistakes a proof reader will detect easier and, maybe, help you correct them before you release the chapters.
    Overall I think you are having nice ideas and hope you can find the perfect way to make then work and your writing shine.
    Hopefully I will be one of the first to see a brilliant new writer be born and I will be able to "join in" in your adventures.
    Good luck on your work and wishing you the best. May the odds be ever in your favour
    Apparently I still need something like forthy new words in order to be able to publish this review and I do not know what else to write, ask or wish you. So I will just rumble for a wile, bare with me. Initially I thought I needed two hundred characters (like in two hundred letters) but, in order to be able to make my review, I need, instead, to write two hundred words. I am thinking this rule is in place in order to keep trollers at bay and make anyone that wants to leave a review feel a little what is like to be in a writers shoes. And, I guess, they managed it with ne. It is excruciating. But I guess I digress too much and it is time to see if I made the cut