Wang Zen: Curse of Silver Eyes

Self-Published

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Description

An unconventional Wuxia story where the protogonist is not exceptionally talented or lucky. Wang Zen thought the biggest thing that would happen to him was being sent away from home by his cold and distant father but soon finds that more adventures await on his journey to be a stronger cultivator. For in this world, only the strong thrive and he has a lot of catching up to do.

[Winner of the Royal Road Writathon challenge]

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
wolfgoesbaa

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYMARTIAL ARTSWUXIA

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.4/ 5.0
Followers
87
Views
292,035

Chapters(316 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • KrypekRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Honestly I can see why the score for the character is so low. That is because mc is not very likable. Its the opposite even but you can also see how a character like this could develop and is very realistic. People dont seem to like it because they can see how easily they can behave like this is these situations and they dont like it. Thats why i would say that the 0.5 star rating for the character is authors success instead of failure. Im impressed to say the least. Very rare thing to see too.
  • norwegian manRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    the main character isn't some blood thirsty once in million years talent or a trash young master. but a normal boy who you can relaten to.  the author also knows how to show instead telling. he could just write "his dad is a little cold and has high expectations, but he cares for his son" but shows it instead. all in all
    s'good
  • MrMndsRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    Character - 1/2: Same CN crap, NORWEGIAN is right about MC not being a murderer/extreme genius, but it's someone I would bully and beat everyday at school.
    Story - 3.5: Average with a refreshing first chapter.
    Grammar - 4: Just a few typos.
    Style - 4: It's hard to imagine the fight scenes, sometimes feels rushed.
    Why I didn't like? Open the box.
    Spoiler: Spoiler
    1- "Stupid dad" sends MC to the best school he could and somehow this is a bad thing... really? Also there's some talk about friends but it's very questionable.
    2- Ex-Machina'ed enemies pops to the "great first battle", why is it great? 10 chapters and there's no reason to cheer for the MC, reading the entire fight is just another bothersome task... yes, another.
    3 - At school we know that MC is complacent to corruption.
    4 - At school we know that MC doesn't have the balls to refuse any shit, almost like those JP beta-male protagonists we all hate.