Wands and Vials

Self-Published

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Description

Set in a fantasy world known as Trimagus, Alchemy is a dying art and Magic-capable humans are becoming increasiningly rarer as time goes on. For the young Alchemist named Kowler Freslight, these were simply facts of the world that didn't concern him. He had a busier life with managing his own apothecary after being forced to withdraw from the prestigous magical academy he'd spent years attending prior.

However, that changes when he finds out how deeply the events are tied into the fate of the love of his life, a witch named Alice Pyralis. Given only a few years of time to work with, while managing a shop, he and his elemental wind spirit, Aeria, must seek out the legendary artifacts that once belonged to the greatest alchemist of all time, Paracelsus, in an attempt to save her from an early death.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
r-kain

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
44
Views
36,159

Chapters(34 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • maskedcerfRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    the story is interesting.
    the reason why it is not five star is because i am the kind of ass who say it can always be better, but i do not possess the hability to help him (the good student is a great fiction so maybe you can gain something from reading it).
    the style is good on the eye and nothing feel forced.
    the grammar is good, not being a native english speaker i cannot say if it's perfect but i was never bothered by it during my reading.
    the story is interesting, original and the character in it does not feel overpowered.
    the principal characters are great, the two most important possess personality and the side character are believable.
    the only default i can see right now is the world building which is slightly lacking, but since we are still in the early chapter it is not realy bothersome.
    in conclusion as of chapter 3.04 i recommand the story, even if it's not perfect, it is still in the upper part of the story of this forum.