Wandering Soul

Self-Published

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Description

The typical reincarnation story where the MC died and is reincarnated into a world of sword and magic... Or not?Follow the story of an atypical protagonist where he will begin his travel alone and without any tutorial on the road of the non-afterlife. How will he behave himself? If you want to know read this story.---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------This is my first novel and the English is not my language. So I hope you will like it and help me to improve with your comments.Please enjoy it.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2016
Author
ValThuranne

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICFEMALE LEADSUPERNATURALMULTIPLE LOVERSROMANCE SUBPLOTNON-HUMAN LEADHIGH FANTASYPROGRESSIONDUNGEON CORE

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.0/ 5.0
Followers
15
Views
2,386

Chapters(25 total)

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Community Reviews(7)

  • RaveAkiharaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    review 4 chapter this novel is so damm good and has lot potential the reincarnation is so made in Unique way and not a regular summon hero or death then meet god and reborn the style is so new to me :) so why don u try it
  • SomberWraithRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Love the story, and the characters, the writing could use some polishing, and there are some minor mistakes, but not enough to stop me from reading it. I was hooked from the first few words, and I know this is gonna keep me up late at night, because of how captivating it is.and I love the  main characters personality. Keep up the good work author! I can't wait to see where it goes.
  • ScandalfRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    There is something about this story that makes me keep craving for more, just can't understand what it is.
    It doesn't really have amazing characters, or amazingly deep story or something, but it is just kind of story that is like perfect for me ( and I bet for a lot of people )
    Well, just read it. Even if you don't fall in love with it, I can guarantee you you will add this to your follow list and keep reading it.
  • EnnosRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    A way to get the MC in a new world i have not seen before
    One OP MC with a power concept i have not even thought
    and humor that has a black touch to it
    so keep on and i will keep on reading
  • jasonofwolvesRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    So far so good. I like the main character so far. Them not being in their own body and possessing a goblin is interesting so far. My biggest complaint is the update speed, as it is a pretty long time between chapters. The system seems to have a bit of snark, which is always nice. Pulls you in well enough, and it isn't aimless where Mc has nothing to do and just goes around doing whatever, which is always a plus. Enjoying it so far. Not too much to say right now since there are only a few chapters out, and I might update later when it has more meat to it. Now i am just trying to fill in the words needed, and for some reason it ain'ts showing me how many words I have used. Much sadness. Much time is being spent trying to make snetences happen. Much dissapointment with not knowing how many words are left to say.
  • catalinnrRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The story is original in a true meaning of the word.An OP dead MC that doesn't need to train his body(he doesn't even have one) as for magic  he has the potential to have none or all the mana he can absorb in his Void World.And let's not forget about the potential to change the history by going in the past or future by Void Gates(this should be exploited after he gets over the fear of affecting paradoxes cause,hey,who doesn't like a little paradox?) .
    Style is good,being an easy reading ,concepts easy to understand and actual explanation instead of mystery every freaking 2 meetings like other stories on RR that tend to self-destruct because of the very mystery instead of dropping it all togheter(so don't do that keep it as it is).
    But i digress...
    Grammar : not much to say,the chapters are longish enough to not need a PR.
    Character:Here it needs work.Not in making the MC go through betrayal/naïveté/bullshit God person coming and stealing his powers to make him feel powerless or inventing someone that can actually oppose him/hurt him.No,not that ,don't even think .What i mean is make more POV changes for important Side-characters in relation with himself  where you go indepth with their emotions(big font and CAPS LOCK does not always make the reader feel the emotions better)
    Ty for taking your time to read this review.
    AND
    GIVE ME MOOAAARRR.
  • AaldemariandeRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Pros:
    -A unique, as far as I can tell, premise.
    -I genuinely enjoy the MC's attitude towards his predicament and the actions he takes.
    -OP MC
    -Fun and upbeat despite setting (being dead and all)
    Cons:
    -No plot to speak of, again only 7 chapters available so far
    -No real description of why or how his powers work. They just do, which is cool, but so far he basically just seems to have the power to have lots and lots of powers. (there is a description I just re-read it and basically he just wills stuff to happen. Almost all of which is projecting force in various ways. Still cool either way, just ambiguous, the MC doesn't seem to be worried so why should we?)
    -OP MC see above
    -Grammar and spelling issues recommend an editor/proofreader
    A good read to just zip through. Fun and entertaining as a light read. Thanks to the author, just thought I'd give a little feedback.